EternalRipsta vs. Ness<--------Winner {Tournament}

[Vega/Set]

16-22 LINES

First to 3 wins......

BLIND DROPS (drop wenever your verse is ready)

Checc-in first...you have 48 hours before d/q

After Checc-in u have 48 hours (but plz dont take that long)

--because this is a tournament i want all votes voted in this way:

Opener-
Punches-
Flow-
Multies-
Wordplay-
Nameplay-
Similies/Meta's-
Personals-
Creativity-
Humor-
Closure-
Enjoyment-

Favorite Lines:

Over-All =

Vote =




You dont vote that way then it dont count...also add sum shit that could help them out to elevate


Good Lucc!:D:blazed:

[E-Rip]

Checkin In..Good Luck Man, I'll try and drop my verse as soon as I can.

[<NESS>]

checked in, yo eternal hit it up first, since u checked first i guess

[Vega/Set]

its blind drops Ness--you drop wen ur verse is ready--there is no specific who drops first--hence y i said this tournament would be blind drops :no:

[<NESS>]

^ big fukken wat, hey kid changed his name back

[E-Rip]

Damn, it must suck i guess, bein the first one leavin the tourney/
So now your fucked ness, sorry but this is the end of your journey/
You really thought you can compete?, well at least your tryin/
Your not gettin to far, cuz ya flow is as fruity as them kicks you buyin/*
So now its time i let it be known, that i am the best/
He knew i'd rip his 'flesh' from his 'bone, so he changed his name to Ness/**
Ya whole flow is dumb and pointless, you were down from the start/
Now its funny how i realize hes, Never Even Soundin Smart/
Whuts up with Ness? he's bitch, he shouldve been born with breasts/
My flows unable to test, dont bother, cuz either way you gettin an F/
Better yet, your gettin L, you tried spittin an failed/
Cuz everyone can 'feel' your wackness like it was written in 'brail'/
Bout to 'ice' him with punches so they sink in 'cold'/
Like 'retarted river passages' you need to 'rethink your flows'/
So step down now, you dealin with a vet..you rookie/
Call me a 'gynecologist' watch as i 'check this pussy'/
Ya lyrics is straight garbage while mine are fresher/
This battle is over, your like aluminum the way you fold under pressure/
Damn this is gettin heated, this battle is drastic/
Watch me spit heat, and easily melt you like plastic/
This is the end for you, dont even bother spittin, your finished/
Now everybody sit back and watch how I threw him out with the quickness--

*- Check picture thread, some of the shoes he posted were a little...suspect lol

**-His name was Flesh-N-Bone, now it's Ness

Well...there ya go, good luck man.

[<NESS>]

yo i got my verse but skool comp is dumb so cant send. il do wen i get home

[<NESS>]

yea i feel ya cuz, but that shit dont rock//
lets take a journey threw ripstas life, hes eternally cocked//
ya styles been rocked, like ur jaw, man face tha truth//
and u say u can rhyme, but im sure u never stepped in a booth//
ness dont fail, bitch i stay on tha grind//
and u ask wheres my dick?? its located in ur mind.(read his location) and i mean my dick in his mouth)lol
ha, u feel me now? am i too much for u champ?//
now tell these niggas how u lost ur man hood back in camp//
and i feel how u used my name to diss me man, i like that//
but No Eternal Shit Says that im wack//
every shit i think, about u man i spit it//
and u look like a used condom wit my cum in it//
so come in it, cause im sick wit it like sikwitit dawg//(btnhboard member)
uve jus been lyrically fucked, and this time i fucked RAW//
and i can go on, but its a must i put and end//
i kno u feel good, because set is ur only friend//
and u can call me a dick, im in tha middle of tha balls//
and wat did tha right nut say to tha left?"that nigga in tha middle swear he hard//lmao
i guess u put me to tha test, but for sure i got an A//
and im ness but not a nintendo so wit me u dont play//
u feel me dawg? i hope u understand u wont win, no way no how//
and i ressurected my flesh back to tha bones, u get it now?//

lol sry for tha gay comments in tha verse, i found em funny.lol

but yea man nice verse, i think u murdered me lol, good luck

[~Longway~JNC Records]

Opener-Eternal
Punches-Ness
Flow-Ness
Multies-Ness
Wordplay-Eternal
Nameplay-Tie
Similies/Meta's-Eternal
Personals-Tie
Creativity-Ness
Humor-Ness
Closure-Eternal
Enjoyment-Ness

Favorite Lines:

Ness --
ness dont fail, bitch i stay on tha grind//
and u ask wheres my dick?? its located in ur mind

Eternal --

You really thought you can compete?, well at least your tryin/
Your not gettin to far, cuz ya flow is as fruity as them kicks you buyin/*


Over-All = This was a real close battle but I am going to give it to Ness due to that one line -- probally the strongest in the battle. You guys both came real strong though -- keep the verses comin cause you are the future :)

Vote = Ness

[bad habitz]

Opener-Eternal
Punches-Ness
Flow-Ness
Multies-Ness
Wordplay-Eternal
Nameplay-Tie
Similies/Meta's-Eternal
Personals-Tie
Creativity-Ness
Humor-Ness
Closure-Eternal
Enjoyment-Ness

Favorite Lines:
ness dont fail, bitch i stay on tha grind//
and u ask wheres my dick?? its located in ur mind.

I AGREE WITH THE KID ON THIS ONE...Y'ALL ARE THE FUTURE OF THIS HERE THANG.....BUT GEAH MAYNE....GOOD STUFF FOLKS...

VOTE= NESS

[Enzo R.]

Opener-NONE
Punches-ETERNAL
Flow-NESS
Multies-NONE
Wordplay-NONE
Nameplay-ETERNAL
Similies/Meta's-ETERNAL
Personals-ETERNAL
Creativity-NESS
Humor-NESS
Closure-ETERNAL
Enjoyment-TIE

5 - 3

See, look, this battle was pretty good, u both had potential lines, sum where u missed good opportunities for a stronger punch concept-wise, and honestly, ness, u wulda been a big trouble due to all that feeding and sum precense of self-hype, OVERALL, even w/o the category, Eternal had a more complete battle verse wen it came to a more direct hit wit his punches...lines like:

"so come in it, cause im sick wit it like sikwitit dawg//(btnhboard member)"

^^^i mean, so what? that line was jus a waste since it is self-hype, if it was a verbal battle, than it wuld be alright, but here TEXT, u gotta get more creative...u had potential lines no doubt, but u also had ur major flaws...both of u...

VOTE - ETERNAL RIPSTA

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[<NESS>]

^ thanx free, i appreciate, at least u point out my mistakes which help me get better. thanx mayn.1

[E-Rip]

Thanks for the votes everyone

2-1 ...Ness with the lead so far

Keep em coming.

Good verse by the way man.

[BlazeDaStickyIcky]

Opener- Eternal
Punches- Ness
Flow- Eternal
Multies- none
Wordplay- tie
Nameplay- tie
Similies/Meta's- none
Personals- Ness
Creativity- Eternal
Humor- both
Closure- none
Enjoyment- Eternal

Favorite Lines:

Like 'retarted river passages' you need to 'rethink your flows' - Eternal

and u can call me a dick, im in tha middle of tha balls// and wat did tha right nut say to tha left?"that nigga in tha middle swear he hard// - Ness

Over-All = 4-2

Vote = Eternal......................both were hot but gotta give it to Eternal "Call me a 'gynecologist' watch as i 'check this pussy'"

[~Longway~JNC Records]

2-2 next vote seals it

[Sweetness87]

Opener- Eternal
Punches- Ness
Flow- Ness
Multies- Ness
Wordplay- Eternal
Nameplay- Ness
Similies/Meta's- Eternal
Personals- Tie
Creativity- Ness
Humor- Ness
Closure- Eternal
Enjoyment- Ness

Favorite Lines:
Ness--ness dont fail, bitch i stay on tha grind//
and u ask wheres my dick?? its located in ur mind

Eternal--So step down now, you dealin with a vet..you rookie/
Call me a 'gynecologist' watch as i 'check this pussy'/


Over-All = Ness

Vote = Ness

[E-Rip]

Ehhh..

3-2 Ness wins

Great battle man, I gotta give that to you.

Good luck in the tourney

[~Longway~JNC Records]

great battle to both of you --- great sport Eternal

[Vega/Set]

Good battle guys--great attitude..

Ness advances

[<NESS>]

yea man nice battle, thanx.eternal u came strong dude i feels ya. nice thanx.1