Appletondon vs. Boss Smoke<-------WINNER {Tournament}

[Vega/Set]

16-22 LINES

First to 3 wins......

BLIND DROPS (drop wenever your verse is ready)

Checc-in first...you have 48 hours before d/q

After Checc-in u have 48 hours (but plz dont take that long)

--because this is a tournament i want all votes voted in this way:

Opener-
Punches-
Flow-
Multies-
Wordplay-
Nameplay-
Similies/Meta's-
Personals-
Creativity-
Humor-
Closure-
Enjoyment-

Favorite Lines:

Over-All =

Vote =




You dont vote that way then it dont count...also add sum shit that could help them out to elevate


Good Lucc!:D:blazed:

[AppletonDon]

checkin in

[AppletonDon]

ima drop in da mornin

[Boss_Smoke]

check

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[Vega/Set]

cuttin it close boss lol

[AppletonDon]

boss smoke claim he reppin teh(the) walnut tree//
stay in school dawg gge in ya sig can yall say G.E.D.//
P.C.P is what u must be smokin dawg if u think u testin me//
stressin me never that, get beat blue and black till u leakin fluidly//
who me, oh yes,i must confess im da best, so R.I.P. god bless//
ya best lyrical shot wouldnt score against me cause i stop the press//*
done mopped the floor with the best in a ghostwriter u betta invest//
lyrically i molest, im rapin this kid no stains left on ya dress//
excuse the mess i be in ya girls mouth more than crest//
little gangstress leave u stinkin now master ya funk like flex//
lyrically raid this pest all i need is one shot, one glock naw keep it tuck//
jump out the truck what the fuck use my timbs to Stomp this young buck//
you caught 1 L already hears another one call him LL//
so cool down james think shit sweet when i creep and rock ya bell//
tryin to convince people u a boss i can see clear through the smoke//
screen fake thugs sorry ghetto pass revoked u up so go ahead now and choke//

*2 meanings stop a full court press(basketball) and my rhymes stop the media press aight mayne u up boss

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

AppletonDon, like a won-ton have his head long gone//
Found on, a comp like a con's Tron, Don a dead Salomon//

SilentKilla getting violently killed, take a step get triumphantly billed//
Defiantly spilling his brains on the window sill, straight slicing his will//

Spicing his lil' name, with the pain, an Apple under my cane//
Like a deer in the headlights, getting hit by the thunder of my trane//

He'll blunder in vain, wonder why the game plunders insane//
25 years 'til his mind has finally gained, a useful way to train// (his age)

Add 2 days and he's back to getting lyrically slit//
Tyranically hit, becoming a bannable bitch// (Born on the 27th, 2 days more than his age)

Your verse was a test, and you confess to molesting//
It ain't threatening but keep your children away from this faggot's blessing//

Still he messing, with the 'Grounds he ain't cutting it//
And he still fucking kids, sucking shit, he needs to fucking quit//

And stop being fucking sick, now I bet he wishing this//
Inflicting slits with indicting spits tricking this licking bitch//

He ain't a Don, maybe an apple with red cheeks//
Getting his meat beat by some geek treat//

Speaking Star Wars in the bed, gets him in heat//
Homo bitches named Apple getting banged every week//

Hanged by the peak, I'll slice him up from the feet//
Up to his dome, eat his face, and spit out the seed//

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[Boss_Smoke]

alright, good luck Apple...

votes please :)

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[~Longway~JNC Records]

Opener- Boss
Punches- Boss
Flow-Boss
Multies- Appleton
Wordplay- Boss
Nameplay- Tie
Similies/Meta's- Appleton
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Appleton
Humor- Boss
Closure- Boss
Enjoyment- Boss

Favorite Lines:
AppletonDon, like a won-ton have his head long gone//
Found on, a comp like a con's Tron, Don a dead Salomon//



Over-All = I think Boss really stepped up his game big time for this fight-- Ive never seen you flow like this man and it pulled the verse together nice -- Apple-- I dont think anyone here could survive that onslaught I am voting for Boss not against you

Vote = Boss Smoke

[AppletonDon]

good shit boss

[Kurruption]

Opener-Apple
Punches- Boss
Flow- Apple
Multies- Boss
Wordplay- Apple
Nameplay- Boss
Similes/Meta's- Apple
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Apple
Humor- none
Closure- Apple
Enjoyment- Apple

favorite Lines- Apple

done mopped the floor with the best in a ghostwriter u betta invest//
lyrically i molest, im rapin this kid no stains left on ya dress//

Overall- I notice Apple's flow was getting a little better because he had good timing. To Boss, make sure you time your multies so they'll be on point and be more provocative.

Vote= Appletondon

[Sweetness87]

Opener- Boss
Punches- Boss
Flow- Boss
Multies- AppletonDon
Wordplay- AppletonDon
Nameplay- Boss
Similies/Meta's- AppletonDon
Personals- Boss
Creativity- Tie
Humor- Boss
Closure- Boss
Enjoyment- Boss

Favorite Lines:

Over-All = I liked both, jus liked Boss lil bit more :)
Vote = Boss

[AppletonDon]

thanx yall 4 votin still uppin boss is up (2-1)

[FrastyProphets]

Opener-smoke
Punches- smoke
Flow- smoke
Multies- smoke
Wordplay-smoke
Nameplay-smoke
Similies/Meta's-
Personals- smoke
Creativity- smoke
Humor- smoke
Closure- Apple
Enjoyment-smoke

Favorite Lines:
Speaking Star Wars in the bed, gets him in heat//
Homo bitches named Apple getting banged every week//


tryin to convince people u a boss i can see clear through the smoke//
screen fake thugs sorry ghetto pass revoked u up so go ahead now and choke//

I feel smoke had an all together better verse it was more complete
Over-All = Smoke

Vote =Boss Smoke

[Vega/Set]

thats 3...good battle guys u did ur thing...great shit


Boss advances

[AppletonDon]

aight ya i respect ya votes good luck to the rest of yall still in da tourney

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

nice flow boss