Freeda vs. BossSmoke vs. Set {Tournament Round 2}

[Vega/Set]

Ok because these are topicals voting jus needs to be in DETAIL, thats all i ask


18-25 LINES

First to 3 votes wins

Checc-in first (you have 48 hours before D/Q)

After checc-in u have 48 hours( but plz dont take that long)






TOPIC = Heaven and Hell (anything at all that has sumn to do with that)

[Enzo R.]

lol, i jus noticed there were 3 peeps in deez battlezeez...checkeez eenz...

[Vega/Set]

Checc'n in

[Vega/Set]

if u all didnt read the one thing i posted------------The best 2 verses will advance to the next round

[Boss_Smoke]

check

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[Vega/Set]

Please remember that "--" means im pausing.....








Disregard what you kno of the holy book--i will tell the tale of heaven n hell that has virgin mary mistook//
see she wasnt a virgin at all but dont get shook--she fell in love wit a man, one known more than a crook//
Just one look at him an you would kno his name--speak it an its a sin but in hell its one known of fame//
They had babies together that each would claim--for if people knew of there relationship, the baby would be slain//
so one became jesus an the other came to flame wit his father//
never to know of how he really came to be, but he didnt really bother//
he jus ruled under satan--hatin anyone that wanted to be straightend out//
jus a tainted cloud--but then his father decided to tell him how he came about//
now till this day the boy doesnt understand why he said wut he said//
cuz once he told his son that his mother was mary it jus ultimatley brought his death//
So the boy now a man gathered the army of hell--full of billions of souls from earth whose lives just fell//
-and you could tell, the fury was still in him--years later after his father brought the news--the boy's venom//
they marched to heavens gate full wit weapons n armor made from hate//
busted it down wit the power of evil that the billions of souls combined make//
marched towards his brother n mother who werent clueless of there relationship--there bond//
the boy utterd a few words to his brother n slain him--jesus gone//
his mother tried to stop him but the war was past jus started--it was already on//
n he looked at mary wit fire in his eyes--said you cant be my real mother so now its time you just die................//
...crys of angels where heard throughout heaven--the evil souls not lettin up//
not one good soul from the war was saw gettin up--cuz they were all gone//
like watchin swans leave during a red dawn--the saddness could be felt on earths lawn//
Which is where the boy took his army next--to start armageddon on the rest//
and since the deaths of the humans were inevitable they werent able to defend against the incredible//
Now the boy regins over earth, heaven n hell--all hail the almighty//
you cant deny the truth because its all real especially wen that boy is me//

[Enzo R.]

A tale of demons conceiving every dream of evil beliefs and...
People deceasing and leading either atop or beneath them- -
Seeking a reason to float as a soul - Heaven or Hell?- -
Angels meant to expel the mentally frail - Which men can prevail?- -
Women are jailed - Children entail in this battle - Yell for the hour...
Hell will devour shells and the cowards start to tell of their powers- -
Scour above and below - Up and down - the fucking crowd- -
Lungs will shout once then found under the trumpet sounds- -
Till there’s nothing now...Fires retire silence like violence- -
Angels shackled and tied with spikes tightly by tyrants- -
Eyelids fry by the sight of the Lord - The skies have been torn- -
The sirens and horns define it will storm by God’s lightning and sword- -
But righteous will mourn soon as Lucifer’s born for this shit- -
Forcing his fists in portions and bits of the unfortunate’s throats with a grip- -
Gore is his fortune and wit- -
Torturing kids by throwing his shit in their throats like loading a clip- -
Now the torch has been lit - The dim of the light approaches the end- -
The winged soldiers won’t quit - But killing devils is like roaches to heads- -
Gloating instead...Satan’s troops hate to lose - Wings take the boot- -
Fling flames in suits - White garments now stained so grues- -
The angels never trained for doom - They prayed in groups - Big mistake- -
Their end’s at stake - With red men who break their lense and take...
The heaven’s fate?...
Fuck that!...The father rised on his feet - His eyes on a treat- -
Snapped twice with no speech - And all lives died in a blink...

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

The dominator, I see the world from below//
The free world, something that the humans are bestowed//

God gave them the world in a basket, the bastards//
Control the Earth from birth, while us servants recieve lashes//

The perks and quirks, held first above our worth//
Swirv and serve, our girth is unearthed above our Earth//

A revolution I led, with the armies of the dead to overthrow the head//
The lead man, instead, I end up outcast and bled for the words I said//

Others fled, but I stood up to him and was fed and wed with fire//
Below the world now, but inside the world now, I feel the power of the wire//

Beside your girl now, tied to the hurled vow, died for the curled power//
Inside your mind now, the voices that drive your dome wild, as I devour//

The consicious you never had, controll, you always lacked//
I'm the true being, the one in the gun you used, to attack//

The hate in your heart, the way that you spark the blunt//
I'm the Beta, the traitah, to the way you lust to stunt//

But I, like you, am just a creation of the domination nation//
I come from the station, but am now stationed with patience//

And I still come from a higher level, I'm the absolute rebel//
Not the worshipper, the worshipped, the destitute Devil//

The teller, I control the weak & strong with a fist//
Satanistic tricks, I'm the one that feels the slits//

As they come from the distance, as the blood glistens//
Rub the blisters as the cum or the piss is mistened//
The world I shit in, spit this with a bloody crucifix bitch//

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[Boss_Smoke]

Alright, good stuff ya'll...

votes...

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[FrastyProphets]

All jokes aside....I vote for smoke, it seemed like yall focused more on rhyming which in turn stretched a couple of punchlines

Favorite lines
And I still come from a higher level, I'm the absolute rebel//
Not the worshipper, the worshipped, the destitute Devil//

so one became jesus an the other came to flame wit his father//
So the boy now a man gathered the army of hell--full of billions of souls from earth whose lives just fell//

Eyelids fry by the sight of the Lord - The skies have been torn- -
The sirens and horns define it will storm by God’s lightning and sword- -

[krayz1e b1zzy]

my vote goes to freeda...the n99s flow was ridiculous as usual, but each line i read was on point and followed each other. I can't really name my favorite line without posting the whole verse. So with that said my n99 freeda u get my vote. nice idea on the battle and good battle to boss n set

[Vega/Set]

Boss (1) Freeda (1) Set (0)

[E-Rip]

My vote is for

Freeda

-Man that flow is completly rediculous, I was feelin it from start to finish, every line was on point IMO.

Favorite Line - The heaven’s fate?...
Fuck that!...The father rised on his feet - His eyes on a treat- -
Snapped twice with no speech - And all lives died in a blink...

Perfect closer.

But still props to everyone else, I loved Vega's closer as well, I like how the story unfolded. And Boss, man the verse was sick the whole way through, but to me it just wasnt as strong as Freeda's. But great job to every one.

>>>>

Vote - Freeda

[Enzo R.]

thanks for those who voted so far...nice shit u two...

[Vega/Set]

yea defintly...you as well

Freeda (2) Boss (1) Set (0)

[Darkchild]

Man, what a fucking awesome 3-way battle, all verses were fucking ill.

Damn that was some sweet shit

I loved freedas opening, Set's seemed to be stretched a little and i wasn't feeling boss's verse until the 4th bar.

Freedas flow was nuts during the entire verse, but to me it lacked something.. You know when you read a verse and you can imagine what is being said, like you were there? Well, to me that's what it was lacking. I just couldn't imagine being in the place he was describing during the rhyme. But with Set's i could.

Shit like:

Well, i was gonna quote some lines from which i could visualise what is actually happening, but i can visualise damn near the entire verse and that is what makes a topical for me, being able to visualise the story. The writer being able to link it to something already existing within my cognitive structure and the fact that every damn bar was interlinked, they continued off each other.. Shit was fucking crack

Boss, you laid a crack verse and if you were doing a topical battle against 95% of the people in the forum, you woulda had it sewn up with that verse.. But these 2 guys are monsters, everyone knows that.

Opener - Freeda
Flow - Freeda
Continuance - Set
Visuality - Set
Closer - Set


Damn fkn awesome topical battle

I enjoyed every line from all 3 of you guys

Vote - Set

[Vega/Set]

Freeda (2) Boss (1) Set(1)

thanks for votin

[~Longway~JNC Records]

For me its between Freeda and Set-- boss you seemed out of your comfort zone on this one. Freeda and Set both came with hot verses -- I think putting a beat to Sets his was better designed for this type of battle where as Freedas was more set up for bar quality and more so a regular battle theme -- if that makes sense -- I saw it preety much the same as DC -- with Set very slightly edging out Freeda but only by a very close margin as it could go either way. I really enjoyed Freedas verse -- you came very strong bro

Fav Freeda Closure --

Till there’s nothing now...Fires retire silence like violence- -
Angels shackled and tied with spikes tightly by tyrants- -

Fav Set bar-- great closure
Now the boy regins over earth, heaven n hell--all hail the almighty//
you cant deny the truth because its all real especially wen that boy is me//


Vote Set<!-- / message --><!-- sig -->

[Vega/Set]

Thanks for votin

Freeda (2) Set (2) Boss (1)

[BlazeDaStickyIcky]

mannnnnnnnnnnnn that shit was wicked!!! its hard to judge because everyone is coming from a different point of view and same but still different topics.....shit! SETs verse was crazy right off the start: "forget everything u know about the holy book..."

FREED had mad shit on his....and SMOKE and a nice flow to it........

BUTTTTTTTTTT overall

i think FREEDA takes it.....................VOTE = FREEDA!!!

[Vega/Set]

ight well that makes freeda our first winner but now one more winner needs to come outta this..so keep votin fellas

[Vega/Set]

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^keep voting..we need one more winner

[Enzo R.]

since technically i won, can my bro vote on u two then? he's sleepin but if i pour ice cold water in his drawers he might, JUS MIGHT, get up...and that wil decide it...

[Boss_Smoke]

Yeah, get him to vote...

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[DZ]

Ok .. excluding freeda b/c i think he already advanced :scratch: ..

My vote is going to go with Boss .. He had nice multies and his flow was easy to stay with. I just, alot of times, had trouble trying to stay on Vega`s flow .. with long lines, then a couple random shorts ones, wasn`t really feeling that. I thought Vega did have the edge on the meaining behind his but I think Boss` vocabulary stepped up nicely and fit pretty well with the topic. So overall, it was extremely close, I almost didn`t even vote, but i`ma go with boss by a hair. :nod:

[Boss_Smoke]

Boss (2) - Vega (2)

thanks for voting :nod:

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[Enzo R.]

can i vote?...

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

lazy fukin non-voters

first of all, vega, ur first four bars are basically 8 bars put together as 4, this bugs me only because wen u put the "--" that's basically one bar already, and it seemed u used that technique to fit ur story together, the "pause" is basically like the end of the bar, which technically, IMO, means u overlapped the bar limit, now i aint burnin on u sayin u cheated or anything, but u gotta watch out for too much of that, especially in a tourny

anyway, to ur verse, the thing i loved most about it was basically u created a whole story, original, ur own idea, type story, it was a great way to place the reader in an original scenario, explainin every detail in a rhyme, creatin characters and switching up ideas from sources like the bible to manipulate ur own vision of the topic, the thing that bugged me was ya flow, in ur songs on the freestyle section and battles u hav multis added and a flow i can pick up, here the lines were a bit stretched and multis were at points unpresent and it jus felt like me jus readin it and not rappin it, there was no rhythm, WHICH is where boss shined, he had da multis down along wit his ideas, BUT at points, it seemed he lost sight of the topic, although he did hav the "god" there and the "devil" there, by the topic title, he didnt really make a verse that was able compared both sides in different perspectives, he described more of himself being da devil, and i wulda liked to see more of the heaven's side, and at points, he rhymed tenfold, but the ideas of the topic were vague, and vega accomplished that, having both sides play major roles, describing everything good, jus remember next time, to also focus on the flow and BASICALLY

Opener - Set
Flow - Boss
Continuance - Set
Visuality - Set
Closer - Set

VOTE - SET

great job guys, sorry boss, but ya kno, me's be da tie breaker

[Boss_Smoke]

:aim-cool:

you win Vegeta....Good luck to both of you in the next round :wink:

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[Prince Cory]

nice verses from all 3 of you.

awsome battle.

[Vega/Set]

ight thanks for everyone who voted..great shit from u 2 guys...