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NarcotiX
02-26-2005, 11:17 AM
New to all this, seeing what I could come up with. Feedback?

A true lyracist, his tactics illusive, impermeable and intrusive.
Keepin' real through this life of war, holdin' tight for whats in store.
A lyrical soldier, his arsenal, a deadly array of words that will cut
through your life, his rhymes sharper than the sharpest knife.
Stranded in this concrete jungle, opposed and opressed.
Reality keepin' him stressed.
Fightin' for freedom, caught behind enemy lines.
They just waitin' to meet him.
Held hostage, his partner 'Don Juan'

DaSpliffOne
03-02-2005, 07:28 AM
short an sweat