Appletondon Vs Hollow<---Winner

[AppletonDon]

8 bars
first to 3 votes wins
48 hours to drop

i dont mind goin first but u gon have to wait till tomorrow cause im leavin work now if u cant then u go ahead.

[Hollow]

Have at it and I'll get back.

[AppletonDon]

fuck hollows im gunnin this clown down wit a rocket launcher//
my lyrics haunt ya, imma eat this pussy call me carpet muncher//
u illiterate x-con, taste teflon, got some nerve testin the don//
behind bars u was suckin schlong fall back fag pull up that thong//
wanna be thugs doin 3 month stints i call that boot camp//
miss new booty gettin passed around more than a food stamp//
street soulja he claim to be dont mean a thang to me//
cause when the barells in his face he proceed to bleed and pee//
its a shame to put up with such a lame who aint hip to the game//
callin out my name in vain imma tear u a new frame now feel the pain//
youll see less fame as i out ya flame leave you speakin in tounges like mr McCane(bizzy Bone)//
too much blunts too the brain got this nigga so krayzie insane//
my bars drop quicker than this nigga pants did with his cellmate//
locked up 3 months but only took three hours for Jake to penetrate//
find anotha plate cause u aint eatin off mine punished for ya crime //
now do ya time got realeased early cause he dropped that dime//

[Hollow]

Alright, I finished up with Kray; now, I'ma do a fast 8 bars and sit back for a few days. I'll be here, but I ain't battlin' for a couple.

I hate to break it to you; you too much of a buster to be a Don/
You ain't the king in this game, son; an' you lucky to be a pawn/
A natural born joke, so in comedy, you'd be a fuckin' giant at stand-ups/
3 months, punk. You the type o' bitch to cry at the first sight o' the hand cuffs/
My words hurt, but you shoulda learned: You get burned when you grapple fire/
Attack, I attack back. Squash the Don, turn him to apple cider/
Look at that pathetic verse o' yours; come harder if ya wanna fuck wit' me/
You couldn't win with a trick, 4 aces an' the rest of the deck up ya sleeve/
A barrel in my face? Please, dawg... Everyone's done said it/
What goods the barrel gonna do when the gun's like gas an' unleaded/
Try inventin' a better verse the next time ya bitchin/
An' battlin' a rap-god ain't the best way for you to "find religion"/
With my bars, I'm like a waiter, 'cause with this verse, you got served for lunch/
I shoulda spit 16 fillers, 'cause for real, you ain't worth a punch/
I'm sure the majority of the boards in agreement; today, the Don's losin'/
Call me a con, I'll stick my dick in your ass to create a state of con-fusion/

Well, not too bad, I guess. If there's anything you don't get, ask and it'll be explained. That aside, uppin' for votes.

[AppletonDon]

good shit homeboi uppin 4 votes

[Enzo R.]

iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight....anyway....

fuck hollows im gunnin this clown down wit a rocket launcher//
my lyrics haunt ya, imma eat this pussy call me carpet muncher//
----------cheeeeeeeeeeh, nah man...more of a YOU punch and not a HIM punch...
u illiterate x-con, taste teflon, got some nerve testin the don//
behind bars u was suckin schlong fall back fag pull up that thong//
----------not feelin it...nuttin too complex that completes da attack...
wanna be thugs doin 3 month stints i call that boot camp//
miss new booty gettin passed around more than a food stamp//
----------ok ok, a LIL better but u still needa hit harder than that....
street soulja he claim to be dont mean a thang to me//
cause when the barells in his face he proceed to bleed and pee//
-----------no punch...too straight forward....
its a shame to put up with such a lame who aint hip to the game//
callin out my name in vain imma tear u a new frame now feel the pain//
------------still too straight forward...u jus rhymed...
youll see less fame as i out ya flame leave you speakin in tounges like mr McCane(bizzy Bone)//
too much blunts too the brain got this nigga so krayzie insane//
-----------its alright, but bone references in a bone board is too common...
my bars drop quicker than this nigga pants did with his cellmate//
locked up 3 months but only took three hours for Jake to penetrate//
-----------played concept AS OF NOW, especially since i used it already, hehehehe, but the jail personals against hollow are gettin played as of now, so not jus u but others too, dont rely on dat...
find anotha plate cause u aint eatin off mine punished for ya crime //
now do ya time got realeased early cause he dropped that dime//
-----------decent closer....



I hate to break it to you; you too much of a buster to be a Don/
You ain't the king in this game, son; an' you lucky to be a pawn/
-----------decent opener....ok personal...
A natural born joke, so in comedy, you'd be a fuckin' giant at stand-ups/
3 months, punk. You the type o' bitch to cry at the first sight o' the hand cuffs/
------------oooof, dat is wat HITS people....
My words hurt, but you shoulda learned: You get burned when you grapple fire/
Attack, I attack back. Squash the Don, turn him to apple cider/
-------------nice personal and nameplay....
Look at that pathetic verse o' yours; come harder if ya wanna fuck wit' me/
You couldn't win with a trick, 4 aces an' the rest of the deck up ya sleeve/
-------------nice concept, decent lines...
A barrel in my face? Please, dawg... Everyone's done said it/
What goods the barrel gonna do when the gun's like gas an' unleaded/
--------------u know me, dont really like flips...
Try inventin' a better verse the next time ya bitchin/
An' battlin' a rap-god ain't the best way for you to "find religion"/
--------------haha, more of a YOU punch, but it was ok...
With my bars, I'm like a waiter, 'cause with this verse, you got served for lunch/
I shoulda spit 16 fillers, 'cause for real, you ain't worth a punch/
--------------damn, shit, wat da fuck motherfucker...nice hit...
I'm sure the majority of the boards in agreement; today, the Don's losin'/
Call me a con, I'll stick my dick in your ass to create a state of con-fusion/
---------------decent closer...

wen it came down to it, hollow had da quality punches, the more effective BAM BAM POP, ya kno...he kept comin strong...apple, wat happened, cuz i seen way more creative shit from u in da past, dont start slackin...

VOTE - HOLLOW...

[Hollow]

1-0 Me. Uppin'

[AppletonDon]

uppin 4 votes

[AppletonDon]

played concept AS OF NOW, especially since i used it already, hehehehe, but the jail personals against hollow are gettin played as of now, so not jus u but others too, dont rely on dat...


yeah i kinda figured that but i figured id try and drop it b4 everyone else jumped on it guess i was just bein lazy i gotta step my shit up 4 real i aint been too proud of my last couple of verses real talk

......anyway still uppin 4 votes
1-0 hollows up

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Opener- Hollow
Punches- Hollow
Flow- Apple
Multies- Tie
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- Hollow
Similies/Meta's- Tie
Personals- Hollow
Creativity- Hollow
Humor- None
Closure- Hollow
Enjoyment- Tie

Over-All = 7 - 1

Vote = Hollow

[AppletonDon]

2-0 hollows up still uppin ^^

[AppletonDon]

still uppin 4 votes

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Hollow
Punches- Hollow
Flow- Apple
Multies- Tie
Wordplay- Hollow
Nameplay- Hollow
Similies/Meta's- Tie
Personals- Hollow
Creativity- Hollow
Humor- None
Closure- Hollow
Enjoyment- Tie

Over-All = 7 - 1

Vote = Hollow






Apple u had a very hard opponet man.....if it was ne one else u woulda got that win

[AppletonDon]

ill be more prepared next time