ai vs. Hollow<---Winner

[Enzo R.]

ai's verse:


Challenger don’t rap first , but ill spit for the fuk of it//
Flow so sick, you simply cannot stomach it//
And his bitch is lovin it, she say she wanna have my son//
But I Fuk wit em, then im done wit em, so tell her ta hop off my gun//
Got beef?..good my arsenal stretch long, instruments like the symphony//
Put in work then im eatin breakfast at tiffanys//
personnaly….money aint shit ta me//
Cops don’t even look at me//
They know Im gun happy, act up, now my gun happy//
Paper or plastic, Puff n pass it, semi spray him up up heavy, …closed casket//
Don’t got time for hollow im too busy//
Hustlin, busselin tryin ta get the coke fizzy//
stack swiftly, wake up and get my cake up//
Used ta blow money ta blaze up now I just flip bricks//
Fingas cheesy, harvest chedda like sun chips//:eek:
Just smoked a spliff so im hi as the canopy//
Rush in ya bak door, duktape ya family//
Line em up singlfile, knock em off randomly//
Homeless now, he cold outta luk//
catch me at the rong time, ima fuk him up//
my box game like seatbelts, buckle up//
heart cold, u might wanna bundle up//
snuggle up and listen my rap game is unmatchaple//
hollow over P.C. is an improper fraction….. its inrational//
ya rymes are outta style.......ure unfashionable//
lets be practicle….. nicknamed hollow cause his vocabulary is empty//
the joe ass boy shoulda never accepted the battle, he shoulda known he never stood a chance against me/////////////



hollow's verse:
Now you're in deep waters. Nobody'll stop it 'cause no one gives a dam/
After skimmin' his verse, no doubt~ this motherfuckers his biggest fan/
I never let me money go, but you oughtta know I'm known to leave G's in the dirt/
An' dawg, I'd expect less self-praise if I saw Jesus preachin' in church/
I give enough proof to make it for-everclear I'm lethal in verse/
So believe this ain't just a key-style, this is the key to ya hearse/
Battlin' me's your second biggest mistake; the first was the day you was born/
You're goin' against the number one~ those numbers in your name's how you rank on this board/
You obviously gotta be stupid, 'cause dawg, it ain't smart to git at me/
In one way my verse is like your intelligence~ we'll call it art, officially/
I'd knock his lights out, but he's already usin' the bulbs for puffin' dope/
So your chance for victory's like your money, it went up in smoke/
You shoulda came a little more loaded if you was comin' to shoot it out/
The only reason I don't stand a chance against you...chance leaves room for doubt/
I been eatin' M.C.'s practically since this bitch began to eat Gerber/
Call me Corey Miller, I'll kill you in public so everyone can C-Murder/

VOTE NOW...helped u guys out...:o...

[Enzo R.]

IMO

" An' dawg, I'd expect less self-praise if I saw Jesus preachin' in church/"

^^^dat fuckin line alone killed ai...omg wat a nice personal...

overall, hollow had da punches, da creativity, basically the battle rap jotted down correct...ai, dat was more of a free verse, not a battle rap...work on that, cuz soundin cocky but not meetin up to expectations can hurt ya man...

VOTE - HOLLOW...

[Kurruption]

A.I got somewhat a flow, but it only went so far. Try to do less self praising, cause theyll get on you about that here like they did me...lol Hollow took most of the catergories, especially punches.


And to Hollow........your a bully....lol


Vote= Hollow

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

i got nuttin else better to do, so might as well vote here

HOLLOW

basically because ai had a flow, but god wats wit da self praisin, its a BATTLE, leave the shit about you in a solo song, wen it comes to text, u needa bring offensive tactics, hit ya opponent, grab a fuckin barbed-wire phrase and ram it through da skull of hollow so he loses knowledge, dont write nonsense about ya self losin focus on him thus givin him a bigger reason and more ammo that wil finish u like that, hollow had PUNCHES, that's basically it, PUNCHES, that's wat beat him, his flow wasnt needed, his creativity wasnt needed, his originality wasnt needed, PUNCHES, even if they were simple, beat ai

[Hollow]

Good battle ai. Thanks for the votes, people.


An', Kurrupt, thanks for the compliment... I think. lol

[ai151999]

yall are wak real rap if this was a street battle his own team would be on my dik ...and self praise...the hottest battles ever were all about self praise

[Vega/Set]

but its not--this is fuccn text..so stop bitchin n adjust ya game

[Kurruption]

^^^^To A.I., you can self-praise on topical battles.....or else you'll just lose points.

[Vega/Set]

honestly i kno where his comin from though--i go to other sites to battle at times n self praisin is an ok thing to do but obviously not the whole way through--i came here n its frowned upon--so im like ok well let me adjust ta there style, n thats wut i did..aint got ta bitch about tha shit jus change it up a bit

[LostCauze]

Hollow took that one with the first line.

"Now you're in deep waters. Nobody'll stop it 'cause no one gives a dam/"

That shit was more original than ai's whole verse imo

Vote=Hollow

[Hollow]

Thanks, homie. Appreciate it.

[ai151999]

HAHAH wow yall crack me up set u dont change ure style just cause ppl tell u to......and tombstone......you could just not comment next time....and kurruption u must know what im talkin about theres no such thing as text battlin if there is its joe, whether ure typin or face to face it should be the same way throughout no change of style thats some bullshit

[Vega/Set]

:no: no one asked me to change my style--i did it on my own....why would i keep my real style if no one understands it?..then i wouldnt win...so i changed it up to make the readers understand it more...i kinda dumbed down a bit but it was worth it cuz ever since my change i won more battles...stop hatin ni66a n jus elevate

[2BiZzy]

sore loser....LMAO

love this line -->Call me Corey Miller, I'll kill you in public so everyone can C-Murder/

props: HOLLOW

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

theres no such thing as text battlin if there is its joe, whether ure typin or face to face it should be the same way throughout no change of style thats some bullshit

dats where ur wrong

text battles are more complex, verbal battles are off the top no seconds taken to think, text battlin is TYPIN stupid head, face to face is FREESTYLIN VERBALLY stupid head, same way? no

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

honestly i kno where his comin from though--i go to other sites to battle at times n self praisin is an ok thing to do but obviously not the whole way through--i came here n its frowned upon--so im like ok well let me adjust ta there style, n thats wut i did..aint got ta bitch about tha shit jus change it up a bit

now, self praisin is frowned upon in many other sites, self praisin is hot in verbal battles, but people are more picky wen it come to text

[E-Rip]

HAHAH wow yall crack me up set u dont change ure style just cause ppl tell u to......and tombstone......you could just not comment next time....and kurruption u must know what im talkin about theres no such thing as text battlin if there is its joe, whether ure typin or face to face it should be the same way throughout no change of style thats some bullshit


Lol..just relax man, you lost, it's over. Everyone is giving you pointers to work on so you can elevate, just appreciate that and step your game up, dont be a sore loser.

[Vega/Set]

now, self praisin is frowned upon in many other sites, self praisin is hot in verbal battles, but people are more picky wen it come to text

i dont kno wut sites u go 2 lol...but ya i kno wut u sayin, besides i said it was ok but not throughout the whole verse

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

but u cant front he overused it, i mean who cares if he flipped bricks, if ur gon self praise in a battle, do it right, right?

[2BiZzy]

did that dude just say stupid head?? what a weenie...

[Vega/Set]

alias can say stupid shit but wen it comes to a battle he will tear u a new asshole--he gets my respect all the way around....and ya alias u right

[2BiZzy]

WHAT A WEENIE !!!!!!!!