WINNER - Darkchild vs. Ness

[Vega/Set]

16-22 LINES

First to 3 wins......

BLIND DROPS (drop wenever your verse is ready)

Checc-in first...you have 48 hours before d/q

After Checc-in u have 48 hours (but plz dont take that long)

--because this is a tournament i want all votes voted in this way:

Opener-
Punches-
Flow-
Multies-
Wordplay-
Nameplay-
Similies/Meta's-
Personals-
Creativity-
Humor-
Closure-
Enjoyment-

Favorite Lines:

Over-All =

Vote =




You dont vote that way then it dont count...also add sum shit that could help them out to elevate


Good Lucc!:D:blazed:

[Darkchild]

Check check check

I'ma prolly drop tomorrow

Maybe tonight if it feels right ;)

[Darkchild]

I'ma wait for Ness to check before i drop

[<NESS>]

checkin in, il try to drop asap

[<NESS>]

there is no way im gonna win., dammit pringle

[<NESS>]

check my isms, this kid cant flow even if he swimming//
ive been murdering nigga since u was in ur daddys nuts, so u aint winning//
yea ive been known to loose a couple times//
but wen i win, i shine, and uve been known to borrow rhymes//
but i noticed u was trash, by the minute i took a glance//
if u keep talkin shit, il slam ur head to tha ground so call it a face plant//
im like plants, cause u water me wit ur hating and il grow//
u nice n clean wen u come, but wen i step on u, ur dirty like snow//
and u a bitch, never been hood, i know about ya//
and u "the best kept secret"? so how they fuck we know about ya?//
so keep it a secret, cause u and me is real far//
and il eat u like the little peice of chip that u are//(pringlexl)lmao
and DARKCHILD? u far from black and u an old ass mayne//
jus take those points u got and buy ur self a new name//
and if i lose, il kill my self to know i lost to a canister//
il drive u nuts mutha fukka then il throw u out tha passenger....//
seat, i dont fuck wit tha marvel but i spit venom//
i munch the shit out of pringles and wen im done i piss in em//(piss in tha can)
so now u get it dawg? jus back the fuck up of my set//
spit that freaky shit that'll leave u and ur bitches panties wet//

im gonna get killed by pringle

[Darkchild]

Size of your skill is the same size as a jewish boys foreskin after 8 days of existence/*
It's non-existant, you lost more battles than you have won, at least you are consistent/
You got a good voice for rap, i'll give you that, but your text skills are lacking/
Maybe i should stick to writing rhymes and you should stick to rapping/
I seen this kid claimin he a beast, claimin he is down, this kid is not fam/
The only monster i know named Ness, resides in a Loch in Scot-land/
What man? Your career is over like Mike Tyson, this nigga's qualm when he fights/
God damn.. You bout to hear some clappin boy, but there ain't no palms in sight/
Besides the two grippin my twin thirty eights -- sight ain't gon be purrdy mate/**
Fucking with this wordy great, I leave you at the pearly gates/
I thought i'd better warn ya, gon leave you in a box surrounded by mourners/
Now quit rapping on this board and go back to rapping on corners/***
This shit is vital, see we only one round from the finals/
I'm leaving more cuts on this kid right here, than Roc Raida does on vinyls/
Now in this battle here, you gonna need a bit more than mere war tacts/
Fall back! Pro tools is the only way you could get any decent rappers to drop a verse on your tracks/****
This shit is all facts, compiled to show why this kid shouldn't make it to the next round/
Cuz i Never Expected Such a Shit rapper to be in this tourney, this kid better get down/
Watch that frown, Everyone knows a knockout's comin cuz this kid is clearly beat/
I'm severe with heat, no-one vote on this battle yet, i want ness to concede defeat/



VOTES PLEASE!!!!


* Jewish boys have their foreskin removed 8 days after being born
** Purrdy = pretty, you know :)
*** Check his soundclick:
Do you play live?
lol.ive done talent shows and rappin on tha corner freestyling.tight shit
**** Dude recently got his hands on pro tools -- you know like mixing software

[<NESS>]

^haha aww man, i lost badely pringy, i knew it, u came hard, oh wells at least i got to battle ya

[Enzo R.]

Opener- DC
Punches- DC
Flow- Ness
Multies- None
Wordplay- DC
Nameplay- DC
Similies/Meta's- DC
Personals- DC
Creativity- DC
Humor- DC
Closure- DC
Enjoyment- Both

Favorite Lines:

Ness:
i dont fuck wit tha marvel but i spit venom//
i munch the shit out of pringles and wen im done i piss in em//

DC:
Size of your skill is the same size as a jewish boys foreskin after 8 days of existence/*
It's non-existant, you lost more battles than you have won, at least you are consistent/

Over-All = 8-1 DC

Vote = DC

g'luck guys...

[LostCauze]

Opener- Darkchild
Punches- Darkchild
Flow- Ness
Multies- Darkchild
Wordplay- Ness
Nameplay- Darkchild
Similies/Meta's- Darkchild
Personals- Darkchild
Creativity- Darkchild
Humor- Darkchild
Closure- Darkchild
Enjoyment- Darkchild


Favorite Lines:

Ness: "im like plants, cause u water me wit ur hating and il grow"

Darkchild: "The only monster i know named Ness, resides in a Loch in Scot-land"



Over-All = 10-2

Vote = Darkchild


You weren't that bad actualy Ness, but Darkchild killed it from the 1st line

[Vega/Set]

hmm idk bout that vote^^..i aint neva seen him b4 nor has he eva dropped a verse here...your call though guys...

Opener- DC
Punches- DC
Flow- Ness
Multies- None
Wordplay- DC
Nameplay- DC
Similies/Meta's- DC
Personals- DC
Creativity- DC
Humor- DC
Closure- DC
Enjoyment- Both




aint much to say 4real DC jus came at it stonger...but i will say that i am proud that ness came this far in the tourny..good job both of you

[Hollow]

Opener- DC (Came harder, the punch was more vicious)
Punches- DC (More constant, more direct, DIDN'T ADMIT DEFEAT)
Flow- Ness (No need to explain, it just flowed better)
Multies- DC (Some multi's, plus more multi-syllable rhymes)
Wordplay- DC (More in quality, but tied in quantity)
Nameplay- Ness (4 bars of name-play compared to 2, including old names and plays on titles)
Similies/Meta's- DC (a couple nice ones gave this to him)
Personals- DC (All Ness's personals were name-plays, really)
Creativity- DC (More original)
Humor- Ness (I thought it was funnier, DC's was just more brutal. Again, I don't like this category...)
Closure- DC (Wow... Perfect)
Enjoyment- DC (Just a better verse in my opinion)

Favorite Lines:
Ness:
and u a bitch, never been hood, i know about ya//
and u "the best kept secret"? so how they fuck we know about ya?//
seat, i dont fuck wit tha marvel but i spit venom//
i munch the shit out of pringles and wen im done i piss in em//

DC:
Size of your skill is the same size as a jewish boys foreskin after 8 days of existence/
It's non-existant, you lost more battles than you have won, at least you are consistent/
What man? Your career is over like Mike Tyson, this nigga's qualm when he fights/
God damn.. You bout to hear some clappin boy, but there ain't no palms in sight/

Over-All = 9 DC, 3 Ness.
Ness, you just need practice to get skill up in general and DON'T SAY A DAMN THING ABOUT YOURSELF LOSING IN THE PAST OR THE CURRENT BATTLE!!! Confidence is the word, dawg!

Vote = DarkChild

[LostCauze]

hmm idk bout that vote^^..i aint neva seen him b4 nor has he eva dropped a verse here...your call though guys...

Opener- DC
Punches- DC
Flow- Ness
Multies- None
Wordplay- DC
Nameplay- DC
Similies/Meta's- DC
Personals- DC
Creativity- DC
Humor- DC
Closure- DC
Enjoyment- Both




aint much to say 4real DC jus came at it stonger...but i will say that i am proud that ness came this far in the tourny..good job both of you


I never battled anyone here, true. But i did do a few (6/7) textbattles before though.
Here's a link (2 of my verses when u scroll down):
http://forum.albumbase.com/showthread.php?tid=13878
Leave me some feedback, i wanna know what u guys think (This was my 2nd or 3rd textbatle ever)
My name there is TombStone. I've got some more verses posted in that forum. Maybe i'll battle someone here sometime.