Winner---->Hollow and Krayz1e B1zzy vs. Boss Smoke and Kurruption

[Vega/Set]

one verse from each person

16 LINES!

first to 3 votes will win the match

Everyone Check in

Krayz1e B1zzy will start it off an then go from there...

...after he drops the rest have 24 hours after the next person to drop


Good Luck Guys

[Hollow]

Checkers

[Boss_Smoke]

check :beejee:

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[krayz1e b1zzy]

me n hollow spittin lyrical extortions--
we goin corporate, to start killin kurrupt bosses--
this n99a tryin to roll with kurrupt like he's Daz, till i spaz and...--
beat this cats ass till he's just past exhaust, more like gas--(cat=catallytic convertor=cat=him or=car=exhaust)
you'll meet ya Mutha F*kn doom quicker than the nig in ya sigs mask--(his sig=mf doom=muthaf*kn doom)
and im rude, this kids' past through, talkin shit u didnt do--
even though i spit at "G's" i'd still shit on "U"--
and i know boss, its only smilies that he'll respond in--(he always post smilies)
but guess what?, i have a few smilies that he can bond with... :effyou::stfu::nono:--
u testin my presence? u wouldnt go there like santa claus in the projects--(presence=presents=santa claus)
my lyrics is a weapon, i appeal to my audience, so you can feel my logic--(guns=peel caps= appeal)
kurrupt wouldnt draw a gun like an anitviolence still-life artist--(draw=art or pick up)
still im modest, best believe in it, boss' bars aint seein this,--
their duet couldn't touch my bars like a fingerless pianist--
and atlast, ill handle kurruption's bad ass,--
yo Hollow, ill take care of him like he's my kid with a bad rash--
cause as soon as his wack ass checks in, ill have him checked out like a bitch with a fat ass--(checked out=dead or guys looking at females)

[Kurruption]

They actin’ tough like they got Diplomatic Immunity <O:p</O:p
Yall aint’ hard, yall just some dicks without the puberty//<O:p</O:p
This snitch and his bitch will get bled for days<O:p</O:p
I aint’ Spears, but I dumped on these Feds with K’s//<O:p</O:p
When I first heard yall verse, I thought I was in pre-school<O:p</O:p
Yall rhymes suck dick like they in some knee school//<O:p</O:p
Speakin’ of these schools, he was on his knees saggin’
Don’t have to ask to tell you were in jail tea baggin// (Look at Hollow’s profile)<O:p</O:p
We smokin’ they ass, notice the time pass, go check ya clock now<O:p</O:p
See these cakes’ verse get raped worst than Dre off of Lockdown// <O:p</O:p
Kray think he poison with his pen, but his shit won’t sink<O:p</O:p
Cause when you spit, we can’t see you, like invisible ink// <O:p</O:p
Yall couldn’t eat off our plate if yall had the utensils<O:p</O:p
Pop yall with the lead and make yall shit number 2 pencils// (pencil/number 2)<O:p</O:p
Yall hollowed-head niggaz Krayzie, if yall think yall some tough vets<O:p</O:p
We comin’ harder than Bizzy’s molestation suspects// (comin’= cumin’)<O:p</O:p
I’ll never snitch, I’ll go to hell if I said a thing<O:p</O:p
While yall was a cell writin’ tales like Stephen King//<O:p</O:p
These niggaz is bitches, cause they actin’ like their time is due<O:p</O:p
Put these Sheryls’ under wood cause they rhymes is a comic view//

Dre off of Lockdown(Watch that movie, lol)
Chino XL= Poison Pen
under wood= casket
<O:p</O:p

[Hollow]

That verse hurt, dawg; really, so I'ma kill you an' take the pain away/
I'll be like Dre off Lockdown, smack you harder than Dre on Training Day/
Our verses leave you beggin' for more, like bitches on they birthdays/
But yours wouldn't be off the wall, taped to framed pictures in earthquakes/
You oughtta run quicker than innocents when shots from guns bust/
'Fore paramedics put you under covers quicker than cops in drug busts/
Like dead nerds, ya verse passed pathetically, shit was never tough/
Fuck it, I ain't gon' diss you no more, your partner already said enough/*
Boss, you're like a sniper too nervous to even keep his rifle steady/
You ain't gon' shoot me down~ you tried how many times already?/**
You're skills so small, you couldn't locate it wit' G.P.S./
Your teams completely full o' SHIT~ ladies an' gents, welcome Team B.S./
You're games over-played motha'fucker, don't be speakin' o' hustle/***
Tiger Style, huh? Well I ain't Lyin', but I AM king o' the jungle/
A regular Great White, why do I bother swimmin' wit' guppies/
You can't fuck wit' pitbulls, Boss, stick to rippin' up puppies/****


* = Boss and I were talking on AIM... This is part of the convo
BossDaGenius<!-- (4:52:04 AM)-->: sorry but kurruption owned 8-)
MagickKoE<!-- (4:52:14 AM)-->: lmao, yea, cause I ain't went yet...
MagickKoE<!-- (4:52:46 AM)-->: Don't worry, I'll kill him. :p
BossDaGenius<!-- (4:53:00 AM)-->: >:o
MagickKoE<!-- (4:53:08 AM)-->: ;)
BossDaGenius<!-- (4:53:17 AM)-->: to tell the truth, I ain't want him on my team :-\
MagickKoE<!-- (4:53:26 AM)-->: Anyway, you oughtta listen to some Sikwitit.
MagickKoE<!-- (4:53:31 AM)-->: Why dont' you want him?
BossDaGenius<!-- (4:53:42 AM)-->: he ain't very good :-\
BossDaGenius<!-- (4:53:59 AM)-->: he was trying to talk me into letting him go over the limit :-\
MagickKoE<!-- (4:54:45 AM)-->: lol


** = I've beaten Boss 3 times already...
*** = Later in the AIM convo, he tried talkin' to me about bein' a hustler... Dawg, you got hustled. Need proof? Look up. ;)
**** = He was braggin' about beatin' Freeda5thdawg in the convo...







You're up, killer....

[Boss_Smoke]

Ayo,

Hollow's hypocritical, I'm literal when he was the one braggin'//
'Bout an alias to the power of fifth and how I was the one lagging//(*)

Been in jail for 3 months and his mind is still fucked//
On the grind his shit luck has shown time has filled muck//(**)

And krayz1e just a partner with a homo bitch tran//
His vest-tite, in the cell giving hand-jobs to every which man//

His cell was a rich land for every Bubba that planned//
A butt-fuck, with what luck Hollow still bitching 'bout the damned//(***)

Bizzy in a tizzy when it comes to where he stands//
I pop-ed him right there and he speaking Hawaiian//(****)

Can't talk about my mask man, 'cause in the end I'll have you burned//
At the end of my kane in vain, and veins deadman walking 'til I heard what you learned//(*****)

Besides krayz1e your verse is old news, its rosie red and dead like sold views//
I told you, you'll fold to mold the second I need decide to hold pews//(******)

Kurruptions cold dude, and you two homos when it comes to your talent//
Try to balance out two fags for days in ways you pray and raise your hand but end up maliced//(***)

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(*) = he talks about me bragging, but he was saying shit about how I'm a few steps behind because I guess he beat Freeda and Alias at the same time or so he claims :iono:

(**) = he's been in jail for like 3 months

(***) = dude's been talking 'bout God and stuff in freestyle (Forgive me father for I have sinned)

(****) = last I heard krayz1e worked at a soda place; Hawaiian Punch = a soda

(*****) = Kane wore a mask; he used to have a sig/avatar with Kane in it; Kane was supposedly burned; Undertaker is Kane's brother, aKa "Deadman"; and without veins, he'd be a literal deadman

(******) = first line was about Rosie 'O' Donell (jeez she's such a bitch :P) and how she's on the view; also, I had that Doom sig a while ago, I've had this Jaa one for a few days and he wrote his verse yesterday; next line was going back to Hollow talking 'bout God and stuff

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for everyone I done dissed over AIM; ya'll know me, I diss everyone, but its all in good fun :wink:

and for the record, there was a part of the convo where I said I was happy to have kurruption as a partner :nod:

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[Boss_Smoke]

alright, votes?

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[Kurruption]

^^^^Whats up with the props???.......Okay, I gonna ignore that:que:

[Vega/Set]

im not voting on this one cause Kurruption is in this but i do wanna comment.....


Well one team came alot better then i had expected;)...but i mean the personals mixed wit the punches is wut did it 4 me all that n the nameplay from kray n hollow's verses....this shit was real close to me but i gotta give it up to them for that.....great verses my nigs (thats all of you)

[J-Bo]

I find that Kurrupton had a good flow on his part and that Boss Smoke is a good lyrcist so i vote for them

when i say that i mean that kurruption was easy to flow with while reading it in your head and Boss Smoke used some good vocab in his rhymes which will help anyone create rhymes.

[Vega/Set]

thats y u voted for them? all cuz it was ez to flow with? do u kno wut punches, personals , multi's, meta's etc etc etc are?...cuz if thats all your votin on then im not counting it

[E-Rip]

Ok ok, first off, let me say great verses from both sides. All 4 of you did a good job.
Now to my vote, I feel that Krayz1e and Hollow tore it up man. Krays intro was a great start as was Hollow closer a good end to it. I liked Boss' verse, he had the personals..and for the record..Hawaiin Punch is also a soda, but it is more recognized as a juice..hence the "punch" part. But yea thats besides the point. And Kurruption's verse I felt was lacking in a few spots, but was solid overall. Hollow and Kray hit it dead on the mark, and Hollow capitalized off of that AIM convo. Kray's verse was lackin in a few spots but was still strong. So Hollow and Kray are gonna have to take this win because, well their verses were stronger, hit harder with more punches, personals, and nameplay. Boss and Kurruption stepped it up for this one and had good verses. But Hollow and Krayz1e still had the edge on them and took this battle.

Vote- Hollow & Krayz1e

[dafi]

i havent won a battle yet so i wont vote..
but heres my take..

KURRUPTION
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- best intro
- I aint’ Spears, but I dumped on these Feds with K’s (best line out of all
- punchlines started to lack as he went on
- had flow

KRAYZIE BIZZY
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- even though i spit at "G's" i'd still shit on "U" (i think his best line)
- best when it comes to wordplay
- best outro, SICK OUTRO

HOLLOW
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- good come back with the dre punchline
- Fuck it, I ain't gon' diss you no more, your partner already said enough
thats probably the strongest punchline out of all

BOSS SMOKE
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- won with personals
- complicated verse
- best flow out of all

[Hollow]

BOSS SMOKE
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- won with personals
I'ma argue that point... His biggest personal with me was talkin' abotu me bein' in jail for 3 months (I ain't gonna bother listin' off all the people who already used that), then as far as me braggin, y'all needa check the tournament 'fore I went to jail~ I did beat Alias and Free at the same time. It was called the Final Judgement (right before I tore through the vets except for Vega~ unfortunately had to leave before I could get that done). So, basically, his "personal" on me was sayin' I talked about God in a freestyle... If you check the half of my verse against him, all 4 bars were personals... Then, on top o' that, outta the other 4 that went against Kray, two of them were personals (the flip and the AIM convo).

So, I'ma need you to explain that part of your vote a little before I can accept that. The rest I'll agree with.

Now, since you said you wasn't votin' to begin with, I guess I'm not supposed to count that towards either team, so it's 1-0 Hollow/KB.

[Vega/Set]

let it go man--he said his post aint a vote neway....and next time (this goes for all the old heads) if your battlin n u bring up personals make sure u have the links or the quotes or even the explanation at the end of ur post or w/e u need to back them up that way we aint gotta go searchin for em or that way the new guys that are comin in kno that is a personal..thanks

[Hollow]

I decided to comment on it since it wasn't a vote. :p I wouldn't fuck with someone who was votin', but I figured I'd do my best to figure his thing out since it wouldn't be effecting the outcome of the battle.

[Enzo R.]

ill vote later...

[Vega/Set]

hmm ididnt see that--good job freeda i will delete it..

[2BiZzy]

boss and kurruption
fav. lines=
And krayz1e just a partner with a homo bitch tran//
His vest-tite, in the cell giving hand-jobs to every which man//

I aint’ Spears, but I dumped on these Feds with K’s//<O:p</O:p

Best Flow, good personals, and very creative

krayzie bizzy and hollow
Out of all verses, i enjoyed Krayzie bizzy's best.....
best intro as well as outro, very creative as well as best enjoyment....

Hollow had good meta's and i like his dre lockdown response....

fav lines=
this n99a tryin to roll with kurrupt like he's Daz, till i spaz and...--
beat this cats ass till he's just past exhaust, more like gas--

That verse hurt, dawg; really, so I'ma kill you an' take the pain away/
I'll be like Dre off Lockdown, smack you harder than Dre on Training Day/

All 4 verses were very good, but i felt that krayzie and hollow had overall the best verses as far as punches, and most creative....

votes = krayzie and hollow

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thanx for votin, still uppin

[Vega/Set]

Vote on this people

[krayz1e b1zzy]

can we get somemore votes

[dafi]

one more for krayzie and hollow

[Kurruption]

Well, this battle is gonna sit up

[Hollow]

27 people wanna view the fuckin' thread, and not enough of 'em have the time to vote... That's sad...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

this is still open? we need votes

[Enzo R.]

wen it came down to it, i looked for who had da best punches...kurrupt had sum witty shit but not hard hitters against dudes like kb and hollow...boss had sum good ideas, but in da last few lines, they were stretched like heck when he tried to fit the whole punch in there...since flippin was alowed (though u guys kno how i feel about dat), hollow had the advantage wen it was his turn...boss didnt take dat chance at his part...kb started it off well wit sum funny lines and hollow jus ended it wit sum hard turnarounds...

in short, team Kobbow wins...yea, kobbow....

Vote - Kobbow...

[E-Rip]

Ok, that makes it 3-0

krayz1eb1zzy & Hollow won.

[Enzo R.]

thanks freeda for votin, we wulda neva got through this...this shuld be closed wit all da nonsense dat went on in it...

[krayz1e b1zzy]

thanks freeda for votin, we wulda neva got through this...this shuld be closed wit all da nonsense dat went on in it...:D thanx everyone for votin, now we can finally close this shyt