Winner---->DarkChild vs. Set {The Final Battle}

[Vega/Set]

32 LINES

First to 3 wins......

BLIND DROPS (drop wenever your verse is ready)

Checc-in first...you have 48 hours before d/q

After Checc-in u have 48 hours (but plz dont take that long)

--because this is a tournament i want all votes voted in this way:

Opener-
Punches-
Flow-
Multies-
Wordplay-
Nameplay-
Similies/Meta's-
Personals-
Creativity-
Humor-
Closure-
Enjoyment-

Favorite Lines:

Over-All =

Vote =




You dont vote that way then it dont count...also add sum shit that could help them out to elevate


Good Lucc!:D:blazed:

[Vega/Set]

Check-in

[Vega/Set]

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Im up to tee against DC--but he aint gettin far, his flow is average n punches par//
so he fucked comin to the hole, thats y he stay droppin bars// (think golf an prison)
so i stay poppin his lid makin his mentaility quiver like brain freezes// (poppin his lid = the pringle can)
then train leeches to suck out his worse verse so only thing left is lame speeches//
you taint beaches--meanin you stain each n every lil grain of wut u teachin// (beachs + grain = grains of sand lol)
not reachin that elevation wasnt your mission like nasa in failed expeditions//
but its your fate to fall like every empire to strong in ambitions//
shit its a tradition--you get beat by every Cwar veteran spittin// *
its a fact i would prove but i gotta wait till the battle is over n written//*
i got the vision of three wise men so me win-in isnt jus an epiphany// (its in the bible)
i got ya name, its tiffany--cuz bitch u aint a dark child u shine like a glowin white man talkin about history// (tiffany's jewlery)
matta fact you are a white man--more like a lost child like in flight-plans mystery.......// (its a movie)
only battlin u do is fight cans like bizzy wen he was homeless// (lol picture that)
shit jus like disease born kids-- you happiness after the battle is hopeless//(people wit diseases "fight" try to fight it)
here toke this--this is all you hearin cuz its your only way to reach elevation//
your flow n punches dont go together like a cat and dog matin......//
--you stretch ya bars too far like jail cells 100 miles long n built to tight//
bringin tears to my eyes cuz you make me read so far to the right--// ***
--that if i try write my verse its sittin sideways like paul wall--and that aint right//
its jus tilted left cuz the stench of wuts left of ya verse is worse then breakin into hearses//
unzippin bodybags n takin out wut i took from you like bitches wit lost purses//
you used to be the top dog but then i kicked the bottom one from under you//
so then the ladder fell and i came above you once again--your threw//*
and im mean that literally you didnt jus fall i broke u into crumbles// (think chips)
your like a handless runnin back--all you good for is a fumble//
which is exactly what u doin here--you been doin it from the start//
so call in for broken knuckles cuz im gonna hit so hard.......//
that wen u punch ya keys they hit back---no regard//
--i laid off too much nameplay cuz honestly your name has been played fam//
that and i couldnt find a gay named play that reminded me of superman// (he looks like dean caine)
Shit you couldnt come original against me like u were paintin fake picassos//
play off my name if u want but that jus shows you cave in to weakness like potholes//*


* - his battled almost every cwar member (Cwar was a clique here awhile back)
* - i used to be in cwar so im basically sayin we gotta wait to c if he loses to another member

***- in his las couple battles his stretched his bars beyond comprehension lol (but watch him not do it now lol)

* - he made a battle ladder awhile back and i got rid of it cuz it got gay lol

*- my name got played to hell in my las battle which is y i said that

and ne refrence to chips or pringles has to do with his old name which was Pringle



ne thing else ya'll need to kno jus ask</means></means>

[Darkchild]

Checc-n in :D


Sorry took so long

I'ma be out for the day, stayin at my girls place tonight, so im'a drop mine tomorrow sometime and im not gonna read urs until i drop mine :D

[Darkchild]

Sorry it took a while :)

Shouldn't even be in the finals, said yourself that fifth dog did defeat you/(1)
Rhymes like lullabies in which i bang your bitch, skeet and fall asleep to/
Rhymes packin less punch than shadow boxing with Calista Flockhart/
I send your battle to the M.O.B.A, because this shit is not art/(2)
Members tellin you that your rhymes are dope, Vega you're gettin played fool/
Cuz i've seen better written skills from 5 year olds at grade school/
Now stay cool, i know you dont want memories of our last battle flooding back/
I beat you, score was 5 to 2 and now you still are comin wack/(3)
Whats the deal with that? Verbs slice you in half, show the real meaning of 2-faces/(4)
Photo of you strung from a tree with shoelaces on the cover of todays newspaper/
Turn to the sports section, skim through and read about the tennis quite discretely/
Discover it's similar to this battle, cuz it'd take at least 3 Set's to defeat me/(5)
Originality is key to the battle, so you best prepare for your funeral/
cuz your verses are about as creative as books in which you color by numeral/(6)
It's assumable, that pre-2005 you were battling on the wiggles cypher page/
Battling kids that were inverse of twice your age, gettin beat at a frightening pace in cyber space/(7)
It's a step up to the battle grounds, and you couldn't cope even if i gave a boost/
Cuz like McDonalds and Burger King, you need your filler content reduced/
Like a mute button your speak is nothin, my verbal contact makes vital organs cease to function/
I've already beat you cuzzin, ur lines are instrumentals cuz they beat to nothin/
This needs discussion. Facts of why you shouldn't be battlegrounds next champion rapper.. cuz/
Skill is needed in this forum and we couldnt count on you if you were an abacus/
Line 23.. Set just felt an unstoppable force and dropped to the floor/
Line 24.. Dreams of Casa Mayor while on life support in the hospital ward/
Unconcious and still wearing fitteds.. fag.. Just like Ne-Yo.. bald.. no mack/(8)
Have your spinal cord clenched in my hands just to show im really 'holding back'/
Checc out Vega's writtens.. Minimal punches combined with weakest grammar/
Talkin shit about opponents, just pissed off cuz his cock is covered in faecal matter/
Bout to beat and shatter, this kid.. i mean this vet.. every bone/
Fix him with a case of cement shoes, just to see him.. 'Set in stone'/
Your rhymes are played Set, I'm a teacher, consider this my maiden lesson/(9)
Take this wrapping paper, sticky tape and box.. So you can live in the present/(10)



(1) - In the tag team thread, Set said that he could do the tag team battle cuz he felt that freeda5th beat him in the semi (this was before the battle had been voted on)
(2) - M.O.B.A = Museum of Bad Art
(3) - Last time we battled i beat him 5 votes to 2
(4) - One of his old names was 2-face
(5) - In tennis, they have 'sets' the first person to win 3 sets wins the match (at least its that way in male tennis)
(6) - Lol, you know those books u had when u were a kid and shit like #9 was red and #4 was green and you coloured in the pictures according to the numbers
(7) - Inverse of twice your age is half your age (for the non-mathematically inclined) :scratch:
(8) - In every bloody picture he ever posts he is wearing a hat, lol
(9) - Im gonna be a science teacher next year
(10) - Get it?? Live in the present as in.. live now. But present also as in a gift? Yeah.. hahahaha?? :D



THERE WE GO


VOTES!!!!



Hahahaha.. Nice battle Set my dawggggie

Had me rollin on a few lines, lol :D

[Rõ££–X]

Opener- D.C. went for da throat with dat one
Punches- D.C. was more original to me
Flow- D.C. flow was more on point in ma opinion
Multies- Set was a lil more consistent than D.C. was
Wordplay- again, D.C. got him by a lil on dis one
Nameplay- D.C. actually made me laugh with his name play
Similies/Meta's- i enjoyed 'em both, so das a tie dere
Personals- dis is even, you both went into each othas past on da board and used it to ya advantage
Creativity- D.C. came with some original shyt to say dat he's an O.G. in here
Humor- i laughed at both of'em, so das even
Closure- Set made a lil more sense to me
Enjoyment- dis is a dead tie cause i actually liked readin 'em both. i didn't get bored na mean...

Favorite Lines: im undecided on dat one, just leave da whole verse on it lol...

Over-All = dis battle was more personal than anything. both of y'all used da past in da battle which made a big difference. everything was on point. Set showed growth since i last been in here and D.C. showed why he is still one of da top emcees in here. so ma vote dates back from ma 3 years of knowin D.C. and from da beginnin of Set in here. y'all keep dat up, maybe one day i'll come back to battle and add a lost to each of ya records lol :D...

Vote = by da look of ma score card, DarkChild got dis one...

nice battle people, i actually came back to a decent one :cool:. im lookin forward to seein more of da same in da near future from everybody...


~X~

[Vega/Set]

lol u 2 mayn--u had me laughin as well...another great battle....

[Vega/Set]

1-0 thanks for voting roll-x--good 2 see u again

[krayz1e b1zzy]

Opener- SET--- liked the tied in punch for the opener it tied into another line in the verse
Punches-Tied ( i felt both came with crazy punches towards each other)
Flow- D.C.--- i felt came a lil more with the flow**
Multies- SET---u came with u slut ...j jklol
Nameplay- D.C.---took it
Wordplay- D.C.
Similies/Meta's- Tied both brought somethin to the table
Personals- Tied
Creativity- SEX i mean SET
Humor-D.C.--i lol@ some of the punches
Closure-SET
Enjoyment-Tied-- i read both of the verses multiple times and liked each one

Favorite Lines:
SET: not reachin that elevation wasnt your mission like nasa in failed expeditions//
but its your fate to fall like every empire to strong in ambitions//
shit its a tradition--you get beat by every Cwar veteran spittin// * i luv the way this flowed

D.C.: Photo of you strung from a tree with shoelaces on the cover of todays newspaper/
Turn to the sports section, skim through and read about the tennis quite discretely/
Discover it's similar to this battle, cuz it'd take at least 3 Set's to defeat me/(5)--nice flow
Over-All = I really didnt wanna vote after reading both because it was a hard choice.I feel that set came real hard on this no homo, and you too D.C., both did a nice ass job. no homo again
Vote =even though D.C. your lines were a bit long , takes this because i like the flow in his verse, not knockin set because his was just as good. so thats pretty much what it came down to .

[Vega/Set]

thanks 4 voting

2-0 (DC)

[Boss_Smoke]

Opener - Prings
Punches - Vega
Flow - Prings
Multies - tie
Wordplay - Vega
Nameplay - Prings
Similies/Meta's - Vega
Personals - Vega
Creativity - tie
Humor - Prings
Closure - tie
Enjoyment - Vega

Favorite Lines:

Vega -
only battlin u do is fight cans like bizzy wen he was homeless//
shit jus like disease born kids-- you happiness after the battle is hopeless//

you used to be the top dog but then i kicked the bottom one from under you//
so then the ladder fell and i came above you once again--your threw//

Pringles-

Bout to beat and shatter, this kid.. i mean this vet.. every bone/
Fix him with a case of cement shoes, just to see him.. 'Set in stone'/

Shouldn't even be in the finals, said yourself that fifth dog did defeat you/
Rhymes like lullabies in which i bang your bitch, skeet and fall asleep to/

Over-All = good battle you two...the flow was all there, the humor was there, the personals were there...It was all there...You don't need advice to elevate...

Vote = (4-5) vote to Vega

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[Darkchild]

Alrighty

Pringz - 2
Vega - 1

MORE VOTES PPL

:pringles:

X you bastard.. LoL.. Hope to see you come battle my brudda

:D

[Vega/Set]

Uppin for more votes...thanks for votin

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Opener- DC - vega's had a played concept, weak delivery as well, dc hit it wit a personal and humor
Punches- Dc - more originality and quality, vega's setups were a bit lengthy and forced at some points
Flow- DC - better balanced bars with some nice multis, vega was somewat too talkative, which lost its flow
Multies- Vega - more of it there, more consistent
Wordplay- None - didnt see any usage
Nameplay- Dc - the setup, and 3 sets, and shit, it was good
Similies/Meta's- Tie - both had em
Personals- Tie - both had em
Creativity- Vega - though wordy, his concepts and ideas were way more complex
***Humor- DC - vega's style and approach doesnt consist of humor, he's more aggresive, dc however does use humor, so i dont like this kinda category wen it comes to u two, i aint countin this one
Closure- Vega - jus a better hitter, basically, pring's wasnt up to par wit da rest of his verse
Enjoyment- Both - basically

Favorite Lines:

Vega
matta fact you are a white man--more like a lost child like in flight-plans mystery.......//
shit jus like disease born kids-- you happiness after the battle is hopeless//
so then the ladder fell and i came above you once again--your threw//*

Pringle
Discover it's similar to this battle, cuz it'd take at least 3 Set's to defeat me/
Battling kids that were inverse of twice your age, gettin beat at a frightening pace in cyber space/
Skill is needed in this forum and we couldnt count on you if you were an abacus/

Over-All = u both had potential verses, but u both culd have done better

only advice i can giv is the stretched lines, yes, set's personal bout pring's stretched lines is tru, but it hurts wen his lines are stretched as wel

wat determined this battle was the personal usages and i jus think the facts pringle layed down were far more hurtful than wat vega brought to the table

Vote = PRINGLE XL

[Vega/Set]

ight well thanks for voting alias n thanks for the battle Prings...





Congradualtions D.C. aka Pringles on the Battle Grounds Tournament...you held it down wit consitency and power through your verse, great shit...and i hope u continue on with your legacy my nig

[<NESS>]

Opener- Vega
Punches- D.C
Flow- D.C
Multies- Vega
Wordplay- Vega
Nameplay- Tie
Similies/Meta's- D.C
Personals- Vega
Creativity- Tie
Humor- Vega
Closure- D.C
Enjoyment- Tie
Favorite Lines:
D.C-Turn to the sports section, skim through and read about the tennis quite discretely/
Discover it's similar to this battle, cuz it'd take at least 3 Set's to defeat me/

n couple of others

Vega-so i stay poppin his lid makin his mentaility quiver like brain freezes// (poppin his lid = the pringle can)
then train leeches to suck out his worse verse so only thing left is lame speeches//

N couple of others



Over-All = wow very close and great battle, its a very hard decision but..

Vote = ima have to choose TIE, even tho vega got more points on my votes but but where great verses mayn.SICK

i kno my vote is too late but jus so yall can see wat i thaught

[Darkchild]

Fa Sho :pringles:

Thanks for the voting everyone

and props to everyone who participated!

Set you ran the best tournament yet, i loved it how you switched it up during different rounds

Great battle my nig, this shit was fun

[Prince Cory]

Congrats to both. Verses were both dope as. Keep it up.

[Seven1/2Designs]

Pringle, my man... if you weren't such a perfect example of a male model, you could go far with this rapping. That line about tennis was very creative, and you're just perfect overall when it comes to text battling online.

Both did good.. just had to get that out there, cause i'm not really good with the punchlines, and i'm impressed constantly when I see 'darkchild' and 'Set' in the thread title somewhere.