Winner--->Revolutionary vs StAyLoe

[StAyLOE07]

8 bars (16 lines) max

first to 3 votes win

vote must contain reasonable answer or it won't count

checcin-in

after check in no time limit becuz of christmas but just don't take long though

[StAyLOE07]

checcin in

[Revolutionary]

checkin in ... me or u first?

[StAyLOE07]

it doesn't matta blind drop when ur verse is ready just drop n feel free

[StAyLOE07]

ayo check it

revolutionary? who tha fucc hallucinate ur vision to let u see this delusionary//
my word to precise fo ur nursery rhymes, so u might need a dictionary//
revolution seem u filled up with confusion,contribution a clue fo u to solve this solution//
they always known u as a kid with fucced up head so tha scienctist think u tha new form of evolution//
lyrical insanity? i could see tha only thing that u good at, is to speak with ur mouth//
fucc it i tell ur bitch don't think,feel it, while she beat my dick in ur house//*
listen to tha word that i'm speakin, u fuckin dumb puerto rican//
even pun wouldn't lend u his rhyme book,even if ur mom was tha one that pun was seekin//
u might take my verse,switch n flip that,tryin to counterattack my punchline//
i leave u in tha dirt,fo tryin to flip n switch back my own attack with the punchline//
only got 3 bars to go,Loe put ur fuckin whole family n generation in tha hole//
i can't really spit personal, becuz haven't seen u really even battle//
i fuckin str8 shoot u nigga, show no remorse so then i shoot ur shadow//
Brooklyn,yah nigga str8 bummy tell it to yah face yah can't fucc with me//
BX,is where i rest,far from tha rest,get a nigga shook walk around with a vest//
i put hole to ur chest,Hollow tips would get a betta chance to rip off ur flesh, n leave u with a higher-dent//**
it ur boi Loe u noe tha name,got bars so hot,got Hove bac in tha rap game from retirement//***

* = look under his name it say lyrical insanity,tha part where it say don't think look at his sig on tha bruce lee qoute
** = he wanted to battle me or hollow but then i challenge first so he might battle hollow next
*** = Jay-z said he retired from tha rap game but then came bac in it

[Revolutionary]

ima get 25 to life after i verbally murder you/
u bringin a knife 2 a gun fight, the response is laughter no1s ever heard of u/
u speak of shootin gats, well u shootin blanks/
this is lyrical warefare and u a grunt goin against a tank/
im smart weapons like the war in iraq/
battle wit me get the call home sayin u aint commin back/
all that hard talk.. nigga u never commited one crime/
ridiculous this kid rhymed punchline wit punchline/
lets get him hooked on phonics cuz he cant spell either/
u a alter boy goin up against a demonic creature/
beat this nigga senseless, have em on the floor in a seizure/
rhymes relentless like jail time in a life sentence/
ill march thru bx and thas wat ull do STAYLOE/
have u commit suicide,gun in ur mouth,make ur brains blow/
thas the only time ull blow some1s mind/
battle me when you learn how to rhyme.......

1. in one line he rhymed punchline wit punchline lol...
2. hooked on phonics cuz in his sig he spelled immortal technique wrong, and in his whole verse thers many typos.

[StAyLOE07]

ok vote up people

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Stayloe
Punches- Rev
Flow- Rev (Stayloe u stretched ya bars to the point where it lost flow)
Multies- none
Wordplay- none
Nameplay- neither
Similies/Meta's- tie
Personals- Stayloe
Creativity- Rev
Humor- none
Closure- Rev (Stayloe yours lost its flow so it didnt go well)
Enjoyment- tie



Over-All = 6-4

Vote = Rev



Honestly Stayloe i think if your bars werent so long everything would have went smoother for you--but man if u stretch ya bars your flow will b lost n then w/e punchline you had in that line wont sound right together bcuz the flow is off--remember that in other battles homie--learn from your mistakes, overcome them,perfect them n come back to wreck shit:D


decent battle though--and nice to see u bac Rev

[Enzo R.]

Opener- Rev
Punches- Rev
Flow- Rev
Multies- none
Wordplay- none
Nameplay- none
Similies/Meta's- tie
Personals- Stayloe
Creativity- Rev
Humor- none
Closure- Rev
Enjoyment- tie



Over-All = 4-1
decent battle at best...loe started off pretty good but towards da end u start freeversing it wit less direction against rev...rev was ok, but he attacked more precise...he gets my vote...

Vote = Rev

g'luk guys...

[Kurruption]

Stayloe had some punches in there, but his shit didnt impact like Rev's. Stayloe's flow wasnt that off, but it could have been timed better. Rev had a nice counter attack.

Vote= Revolutionary

[StAyLOE07]

thanx fo tha vote people well gotta go to work now good battle rev n thanx fo them good comment....1