Freestyle (needs critisizm, comments, reviews)

[Ay-K]

Freestyle I guess...about being independent from the government, hip-hop industry, and the rest of the society or some shit....




The rap game is like bad developed pictures in a frame/
A bunch of MCs trying to be unique but end up the same/
A bunch of no names rhyming words in the streets trying to come up/
Like a 9 year old kid trying to get a bitch pregnate but cant shoot up/
Its fucked up what TV can inspire in a kids perspective/
Its like these wack record labels and the government is all connected/
Replacing their own words in "The Book" creating their own world/
Messing up God's first intentions in making a perfect world/
Judging the right for the wrong, working under the mind of the flesh/
Like indians who ate corpses from a pond, because they thought it was meat that was fresh/
Or worshipping the wrong statue, waiting to be blessed/
Ignorant minds that wont open, like pussy from a fine bitch that wont mess/
Why wear protection, when your dick isnt close to the ness/
I'm like the kid in school, whos too smart to take a test/
They try to build me like their own, but I'm to smart to be possessed/
Unlike these insecure bitches, who'll do anything to be like the rest/
Fuck the rest ! .. your taking lessons from the wrong man/
Your making music with the wrong band/
You jacking off with the wrong hand/
You fucking with the wrong man..

[Righteous_felony]

your freestyle has purpose and vision
unlike some of the niggaz on their verse constantly bitchin'
they know me..i'll be serving them up something hot like mom in the kitchen. The minds of youth is trapped stuck in a trap they can't escape their pain so they decide to bust back with gats they get caught up in this misunderstanding that it's cool to be a gangsta out there banging// until some young soul get's poped and mommy has to make funeral arrangements//now she's stuck with payments//get's so bad she has to sell her house and live in somebody's basement// the point is that brothers be sadly mistaken if they can tell me that they are g's when i know they be faken// big up to faith big up to big L i hope all is well nigga big up to K-dwell who's lock'd up in a cell you know peace, love, fuck you niggaz

[crazedSoulja]

The rap game is like bad developed pictures in a frame/
A bunch of MCs trying to be unique but end up to be the same/
A bunch of no names rhyming words in the streets trying to come up/
Like a 9 year old kid trying to get a bitch pregnate but cant shoot up/

^^^man really this is hip hop....step up your game bruh...cause you spitting nursery rhymes homie....

[4LORN]

awww man freekin awesome...keep it up whatever u doin....keep it up!!!!

[Ay-K]

[quote="crazedSoulja"

^^^man really this is hip hop....step up your game bruh...cause you spitting nursery rhymes homie....[/quote]


ha i feel you on that.. this is why I never freestyle type or whatever on this bitch because I'll look back at the shit and be like...wack... thats why I realy got to spend hours on a rhyme

[RK_Severe]

ask gay soulja to spit something real i mean real shit nigga not what you do wit' yo' mommy and daddy i mean sit back smoke a blut (huh lol) only if your mommy let's you but look at the world in a different angle and write it in your own words paraphrase the shit you see

[~Longway~JNC Records]

ask gay soulja to spit something real i mean real shit nigga not what you do wit' yo' mommy and daddy i mean sit back smoke a blut (huh lol) only if your mommy let's you but look at the world in a different angle and write it in your own words paraphrase the shit you see


you need to start respecting others. All the drama you have caused has been caused by yourself on yourself by taking a dead rappers lyrics and quoting them as your own. Keep it up and you will not be allowed back here