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silent_assasin
01-10-2004, 05:55 PM
great poem

MzKRaYzi3BoNe2u
01-13-2004, 11:48 AM
hella bomb poem.

Young_Thugsta
01-15-2004, 06:30 AM
thanks fam for the support i've
been gone for a while i will be returning with some more so be on the look out

xCasperx
02-26-2004, 03:48 AM
it was good but you repeated
some words too many time, but tyte poem.

Young_Thugsta
02-26-2004, 05:37 AM
Thanks Casper but the repetition
was on purpose

xCasperx
03-08-2004, 10:38 AM
no i mean you said
the same words too many times, try using a different word to describe the same thing. Its good
n all but it would sound alot better if it you opend your vocabulary.