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4LORN
03-27-2005, 11:58 PM
how many will claim to be killas i think most of y'all are just scattin'
just rhymin words together thinkin one day ull go platinum
with ur "i'm killa and i'll filla body fulla bullets
aint nobody realla hard as armadilla on the trilla
if ya tripp loc my gun gone smoke and i'm drunk off malt liquor""
..and all that other nonsense i don't feel the passion...
what's sad is
u actually believe that your cool
when ur rhymes tell me different
man u shoulda stayed in school
shoot...man i just don't know what makes u act the way u do
or are u even actin at all and thats just u bein u....
i've listened to ur music and i hear alotta clones
remember all them songs u used to listened to from Bone
all that talk about biters and people copyin their style
...well guess what....they're talkin about u dude... u must be in denile
but i think deep down inside u knew that u were phony .....
just recite truth man.... now do you wanna change ya testimony?
Stop lyin to urself and other people claimin that it's fact
.........soundin like your constapated while ur whisperin ur raps
must of had ur mother in the other room and didn't want her to hear her little boy
flowin on his computer like he a thug from detroit
tryin to sound like your krayzie bone
sometimes i hear a bizzy clone claimin that the war is on...
lol.............. wait wait..................................just hold on
i think u been playin a little too much of that SOCOM ........little boy............


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a lil sumthin just i don't know...for the people who think that they are soooo freaakinn' cool who blatenly jack a style.....it's one thing to be inspired but another thing to copy.......it's not really a battle rap....i don't do that... (IF U ARGUE WITH FOOLS THE SPECTATORS WON'T TELL THE DIFFERENCE)

just a lil somethin to get off my chest while on soundclick listenin to phony ass people pretendin to be so cool with their phony ass self......lol....n/m whutever............ it doesn't even matter just bugs sometimes........ how many sheep will follow these people??

bandit
04-05-2005, 09:54 AM
u suck u need 2 work on ur shit ok thats 4rizal. :cry: dont cry ok mutha fucka

LIL' SKINNY
04-05-2005, 11:42 AM
seriously dogg you need to work on yo shit cuz you wack just like your title "most rappers are wack" you sure you wasn't referin to yo self

4LORN
04-05-2005, 08:46 PM
yeah i was reffering to myself....u figured me out....
boo hoo hoo poor me


alright my niggas
i don't like being referred to as mutha fucka my niggas
this is some real shit my niggas
thank u my niggas
for ur constructive criticism my niggas
uh uh uhhhh
you could tell from like 50 feet in the air my niggas
uh uhhhh
that i suck my niggas....
uh uhhh

darn ...u know what....? u guys are right.... :cry: i'm a piece a crap...thank you for being jerks....

CuttenHeadz
04-06-2005, 06:33 AM
jus take ur time yo...dont let deez herbs on here discourage u either...id bet 90% cant spit 4 shyt

peace

4LORN
04-06-2005, 09:21 PM
hey on the real thanx man...i appreciate that
i know i'm not freakin awesome thats y i'm postin to get some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism not to be just put down....but whatever...thanx dude......

Smooth Sniper
04-08-2005, 12:29 AM
I agree man, You do suck, but that don't mean that you can't get better at it! All you can do is read a lot of other peoples shit an learn how they do things an how they word sertan things. and don't worry bout the spelling, cuz I can't spell that well my self! Keep practising! Pice out!

PHAT 328
04-08-2005, 01:20 AM
you dont suck, that was pretty good. But you know what the saying is, practice makes perfect...

Smooth Sniper
04-13-2005, 11:20 PM
See boy This collabo. will definantly help you. But don't get it twisted lil thunder cat, I STILL WANNA SEE YA' BEST IN EVERYTHING YA' DO! AIGHT?