my lil freestyle bout damn juvi lol

[Brown*]

nigga bout sixteen,
got detained had a big metal door put in front my big dreams,
two days felt like bout two weeks,
time goin by slow like screw beats,
got the popo decidin who eats,
in my mind im thinkin fuck the police,
but when i ask em i tell em lemme out please,
in the cell got me goin crazy,
just wonderin where the weed blowin days be,
wake up in the mornin wit my eyes feelin hazy,
will the judge lemme out will the nigga even hear me out,
fuck it im home now and thats what its all bout

yea... aint that great...

[Smooth Sniper]

I think you can do a lil more work to it I think You have some mean ass talent an you just need to find a way to release it! Good drop! Outy'z!

[Brown*]

yea i didnt put much into it but thanks