The Demon inside of me!

[Smooth Sniper]

I'm solemnly trapped in odysseys - misbegotten in life's anomalies
Probably psychotic - psycho psychology bothers me
Corroding molded brain tissue due to pain and misuse
And blaming issues on pervasive sins we choose
My brain is abused - frame is whithered and ruined
Slithering slippery thoughts protrude - filled with doom
Gloom and seclusion embody me - every corner is monotony
The same dark and rotten scenes replayed virtually by memory
Somebody just fuckin' end me - my soul is empty - suspended in grief
I'm cryin' - so a fuckin' ocean below me's drownin' my speech!

[Smooth Sniper]

Soulfully, holes pull me, blood hopelessly flows in me//
My mind channels thoughts deeper then the philosophies of socrates//
Cities of anomalies, my pens bomb prophecies, death’s autonomies//
Games of phsychology spray, raise the heavens of astronomy//
Grow stray like rain from drive by’s, and see the hearts of men//
Forensics examine my notepad, blood soaks and adds life’s end//
Seeing the purpose, after my croakin decides to surface//
Walkin around the world, chalk lines outline my steps, where the curtains?//
Like in a body cast, its all hurtin, through a painting im observin//
In a gallery where im lurkin, covered by the lines of unjust and disturbin//

[4LORN]

i personally dig the imagery a lot in both of those...i liked the first a lil better.....and your vocabs on point.....just wonder how its done when u spit it

[Smooth Sniper]

thanx dude. I needed to know what someone thought bout my thought'z! I'm just tired of replyin to everyone an not gettin anything back, but hey thanx dude! He let'z do a calaboration! I'll start it off you follow! what do ya' say?

[4LORN]

i dont know if ya wanna do that with me...people seem to think i kinda suck so if ya wanna keep ya rep up ya might wanna find someone else dude....but i can give a whirl

[Smooth Sniper]

Who give'z a flyin fuck what people think, they don't know you!
An I told you to step it up! Well read my shit an then spend as log as you need to post your'z. Don't try to think to hard let your mind just wounder an let it out with word'z. Then don't try to over do it, just let it come out.

[The Empress]

:-) this is hella tite boy!

Keep up the good work.... this is sumfin i decided to add to this....

my sore eyes have anylised way too much to even speak/
so ima scream the truth out at the silence till the demons get weak/
some people know the truth but they choose to do nothin but weep/
self pitty makes us weak.... WIPE THAT TEAR OF UR CHEEK!/
If we keep walkin in circles, things should only repeat/
our actions need to be loud... my fists are tired of stayin discreet/
If it means a whole generation sacrificed, to clear away the evil that reeks.../
Well ima be the first solider lined up on the street!/
Please dont let me die in vain... theres only so much good to gain/
I couldnt sleep until my palms with-hold lucifers remains/
Only the blood of evil can wash away societys pain/
I've cried with my heart & i've strained/
to bring clarity across to arogant brains/
but im still here.... still got liquid through my veins/
& while im livin i wount stop tryin to cease the sinning against all goods name/


PEACE

[4LORN]

daaanggg that was pretty tight...!

[The Empress]

thank u maan

[Smooth Sniper]

Alway'z lovin it girl. Hope thang'z goin a lil better for ya'!