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Vega/Set
04-13-2005, 04:39 PM
names Ouija
comin threw tha darkside, through the board
ready for sum homicide, slashin wit my sword
rippin flesh from ya stank ass hyde
dont run dont hide, you do thats your life
cut you up something derranged wit my knife
having tha crowd look at you in awww
trying to forget what tha fuck they saw
mercy screams mean shit to me
i kill whoever stands in front of me
pleadin wit me will have u bleedin in places you woodnt believe..
cock back, can you feel the relase of the power that i pack
like good weed its an amazing hit
im lit like candles, fuck wit me n ur body gets mangled
left in shambles
its a gamble comin up at me
physically or lyrically no one knows what happens
but once u roll dem dice ur trapped
in fact your worse off bein dead
cause i cood torture u all day&nite and neva go to bed
drown u in a pool of red but not kill you
so you can see who i am
tell everyone who i am
but no one wood believe you
ima myth nobody knows if im real
tha deadly shadow wit da quickness to kill
runnin up and dumpin bodies
steadily gunnin wit a 12 gauge shotie
jumpin an buckin bitch nobody can stop me
pop me but im comin back twice as hard
so im cockin da gun & leavin ya body in tha yard
im tha sarge on the frontlines
mothafucka read between tha lines
my rhymes cant be touched

Smooth Sniper
04-13-2005, 07:33 PM
I really didn't feel this pice. I didn't see the message you was tryin to bring, but hey I'm sure you can do better. There was this pice of your drop that I did like,
(ima myth nobody knows if im real
tha deadly shadow wit da quickness to kill)
That was hot. It also sound'z like you tryed to copy Nano'z style, witch isn't that good eather, in ya' verse, or it could just be me! What ever the case you need to step it up son!