IN MY WORLLD (this is how to pick up girls - trust me)

[bobby]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/bobbyt.htm


i wrote her a song...
didnt giv it to her, but when i let other girls hear it, they thought it was "sooo sweet" and now
ive gone out wit three of them!

try it !!


plz tell me wut you think...

[ROACHEDEMON]

nice lyrics...like the hook...like
the verses...your style is tite cuz I like this shit...i like how you rhyme nice shit

[EScoTT]

tight shit..chorus was pretty
good...verses were tight..nice flow..keep droppin'.

[Aeon]

i cant really here you on the
hook, except the numbers. sounds like its cool tho. verses sound pretty coo. i like your voice,
u get off a few spots and get a lil choppy. but it sounds pretty good man.

[JCThugsta]

quality needs a lotta work, i can
hear the pop sounds, ur flow is ok, lil choppy at parts, ur hook is not understandable, speak
more clearly, keep practicing, pz

[bobby]

thanks for the feedback

i
kno its not that clear, ive got another version which is not perfect either but much clearer using
the "if they only knew knew" beat. ive posted it b4. il put it on my soundclick later, bcoz im at
work now!

thanks guys
keep it coming

bobby

[bobby]

i got a different version up now
wit a better beat and better delivery

check it out, lemme kno wat you think...