E-Rip
03-09-2007, 05:01 PM
Ok well this is the complete thing, from my last peice about the peer pressure. So here's everything, it's a bit long, but i would really appreciate it if you'd take the time to read it and drop some feedback..Thnks.
Josh was just an average kid, trapped in the midst-
Of a bad crowd, who would end up damagin' his-
Future plans that exist, like every other story, this is havin twist-
One day they all just insist, he should take a couple of hits-
He tryed to resist, but still lined up his lips, it was the pipe that he kissed-
You see the skies, he was higher than this, but then hit a low lifeless abyss-
Said he'd never try it again, struck with continuous guilt-
Still tried it a few more times, didnt realize the addictions that built-
See what this whole thing leads to? Went from weed, now on coke & needles-
Goin thru days tired, slow and feeble, you cant stop, yet you know its evil-
What about those that need you, not ya friends & all this dope they feed you-
Your a good student, suprised you cant see through, you got a clear view-
No need to, fit in with these dudes, please just be you-
You say these addiction are small, look how these things grew-
Ya stuck in a life filled with problems, instead of ya mind filled with knowledge-
Ya goals, you lost em, didnt graduate, forget goin to college-
I expected better things, seein how your only seventeen-
You lost everything, deeply depressed is how ya parents seem-
You said you weren't causin nobody harm, except for ya mom-
When she found you dead in the bathroom, needle still stuck in ya arm---
Amanda was just ya average girl, trapped in this world-
Of abuse and hatred, trapped like a pearl-
Just sittin there, stuck inside of its shell-
It's suprising as well, that shes still alive in this hell-
Little girl only 12 years old, does never as shes told-
Boyfriend's 16, lets see how the story unfolds-
Amanda says she hates her mother, her family doesnt love her-
Daddy beats her, she cries herself to sleep under covers-
One day boyfriend asks if she trusts him, she says that she loves him-
There they go, no rubber they get to fuckin-
Kinda sad, that Amanda didn't know this-
That in a few months she noticed that her stomach grows big-
Her moms found out, then kicked her out the house-
Her boyfriend heard the news, then he just bounced-
Never seen a girl her age with no friends-
So she continues to let the blade hit her skin-
Thinkin her pain will quickly end, think again-
She goes to the doctor, finds out shes pregnant with twins-
Little Amanda didn't care for her life or what it's worth-
Now ya moms stuck with 2 kids, 'cause Amanda died givin birth---
Rob was just ya average guy, trapped in the lie-
That the gang was his life, no need to ask why-
It's sad to see, part of it he had to be-
Wasn't livin' happily, said this was his new family-
Came from a broken home, had to do things on his own-
But neglected his problems and went out to get blown-
4 years ago, initiation, he had to get beat-
He was trampled by feet, collapsed in the street-
He got back on his knees, then got cracked in his teeth-
4 years later, he thinks he's a man 'cause he's packin the heat-
16 years old, you'd be suprised at what dude's seen-
Over the years been introduced to new things-
Shootouts and drive-by's, his daily routine-
It's kinda sad how ya failing to see-
The bigger picture, you haven't been to school in years-
But it's school he fears, its just useless here-
No education, yet he's "the shit", not gettin a grip-
Yellin out his set as he empties the clip-
Cmon Rob, I know your better than this-
He goes to reload, bullets fly, and in his head he gets hit---
[No hook as of yet, but for now, all feedback is greatly appreciated]
Josh was just an average kid, trapped in the midst-
Of a bad crowd, who would end up damagin' his-
Future plans that exist, like every other story, this is havin twist-
One day they all just insist, he should take a couple of hits-
He tryed to resist, but still lined up his lips, it was the pipe that he kissed-
You see the skies, he was higher than this, but then hit a low lifeless abyss-
Said he'd never try it again, struck with continuous guilt-
Still tried it a few more times, didnt realize the addictions that built-
See what this whole thing leads to? Went from weed, now on coke & needles-
Goin thru days tired, slow and feeble, you cant stop, yet you know its evil-
What about those that need you, not ya friends & all this dope they feed you-
Your a good student, suprised you cant see through, you got a clear view-
No need to, fit in with these dudes, please just be you-
You say these addiction are small, look how these things grew-
Ya stuck in a life filled with problems, instead of ya mind filled with knowledge-
Ya goals, you lost em, didnt graduate, forget goin to college-
I expected better things, seein how your only seventeen-
You lost everything, deeply depressed is how ya parents seem-
You said you weren't causin nobody harm, except for ya mom-
When she found you dead in the bathroom, needle still stuck in ya arm---
Amanda was just ya average girl, trapped in this world-
Of abuse and hatred, trapped like a pearl-
Just sittin there, stuck inside of its shell-
It's suprising as well, that shes still alive in this hell-
Little girl only 12 years old, does never as shes told-
Boyfriend's 16, lets see how the story unfolds-
Amanda says she hates her mother, her family doesnt love her-
Daddy beats her, she cries herself to sleep under covers-
One day boyfriend asks if she trusts him, she says that she loves him-
There they go, no rubber they get to fuckin-
Kinda sad, that Amanda didn't know this-
That in a few months she noticed that her stomach grows big-
Her moms found out, then kicked her out the house-
Her boyfriend heard the news, then he just bounced-
Never seen a girl her age with no friends-
So she continues to let the blade hit her skin-
Thinkin her pain will quickly end, think again-
She goes to the doctor, finds out shes pregnant with twins-
Little Amanda didn't care for her life or what it's worth-
Now ya moms stuck with 2 kids, 'cause Amanda died givin birth---
Rob was just ya average guy, trapped in the lie-
That the gang was his life, no need to ask why-
It's sad to see, part of it he had to be-
Wasn't livin' happily, said this was his new family-
Came from a broken home, had to do things on his own-
But neglected his problems and went out to get blown-
4 years ago, initiation, he had to get beat-
He was trampled by feet, collapsed in the street-
He got back on his knees, then got cracked in his teeth-
4 years later, he thinks he's a man 'cause he's packin the heat-
16 years old, you'd be suprised at what dude's seen-
Over the years been introduced to new things-
Shootouts and drive-by's, his daily routine-
It's kinda sad how ya failing to see-
The bigger picture, you haven't been to school in years-
But it's school he fears, its just useless here-
No education, yet he's "the shit", not gettin a grip-
Yellin out his set as he empties the clip-
Cmon Rob, I know your better than this-
He goes to reload, bullets fly, and in his head he gets hit---
[No hook as of yet, but for now, all feedback is greatly appreciated]