alright ...guess its my turned to get bombed on..

[4LORN]

whatever i write i wont like
how hard could it be to express how u feel inside
the more i try the more frustrations build up
yet i'm still doin it and goin for it still havent given up
i suck ....that isnt reason enuff
purple haze playin mind games on me to the point where i forgot just who in the fuck i was
sat for hours depressed stressed with every inhalation of my breath
repressed the urges to cut myself as my heart continues to race
i decided to tranfer every ounce of my pain through this keyboard and spill my blood all over this page
it never stays great and time wont heal this pain
as i'm twisting and turning doing my best to ease the strain
and time keeps passin by as well as my smiles
but when they do happen its worth so much
don't want no blunt as my crutch
to help me cope with the times
no matter what still stuck in the dumps i guess its just my design


feedback....or whatever.......thanks for the read

[damkrayzie]

I like it. good word play

[widowthug]

dont be so hard on ya self, it was more than good enuf, keep doin ya thang
peace

[MiZzDaYzEe]

ur good and its tru dont put urself down like that....it dont make it N E better....keep doin wut cha doin!!!! ArAtOz MuahZz:-*

[4LORN]

hey thanks alot chall...means alot!

[Smooth Sniper]

Ayo duke, the more ya put your self down the more ya brain will think that way an your hart will belive it an you will only be a negative person, as long as you keep trying an trying an if you fall pick your self up, dust yourself off an go right back at it again. You have to think positive, that is the only way you will be a + instead of a -! That was good, I liked most of it to be hounest, but I know that is not you best, trust me I've seen way better come out of you so spit that sick shit! I'm out

[Silence-E]

Yea man u need to slow down on the reefer that shit a depressent the more u smoke wit that attitude u can get worse ive been thru that and im still recoverin u need to stop thinkin too much negative and find urself a goal and focus on it and feel good to accomplish it raise up ur selfesteem and wit a skill that u posses work it out and do wut u need to do.
Nice drop by da way
God Bless

[Smooth Sniper]

see nigga! Ya hurd?

[4LORN]

lol, I heard dude, it's just a frustrated flow, but I'm workin' man, I'm a keep applyin' the pressure till I get things how I want!

PAYYYYCCCCEE!!!