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Psychosis
01-09-2004, 05:46 PM
when you say my name worlds of thought are breathed into the air~*
spun around
intensifing every emotion that was already there~*
allowing it all to be destroyed upon
reaching my ear~*
as perfect as the ocean is the essence of a singular tear~*
and i
whisper your name in the same way the world was formed from chaos~*
and i painted the
night sky with each individual star as a constellation to display us~*
as intimate reciprocals
of lost life that finally found each other~*
in the harmony of discord and melody of love to
discover~*
i was clasping your hand like the sea meets the shore where the waves
break~*
and every breath you would take would make,
the sun rise and the moon set,
and days pass and nights drift on~*
covering the earth with dew wet from passion we’d sip
on~*
as it left our bodies heaving beneath the canvas of the world, we’d see in eachother
when we took time to listen~*

luvBONE12
01-11-2004, 03:37 PM
that wuz beautiful. i really needed to read somethin like that. my
moods kinda bitter, but while reading somethin so sweet, i felt a lil' better. excellent work.
:cool:

Psychosis
01-12-2004, 05:40 PM
Thank You LuvBone12, I Really
Appreciated For Readin My Poem....And I'am Happy That i made you Feel A Little Better...

Im Going 2 be writting More....Thanx Once Again

Psychosis
03-06-2004, 04:22 PM
Thanx EveryOne for
the feedback