damkrayzie
04-27-2005, 01:38 PM
I posted this at the bizzy bone board a while ago and got some good feed back so tell me what you think.
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Emotion, Devotion Trapped In My Mind, A Given Whiplash From Embarrassment-
Incessantly Tingles Through The Back Of My Spine-
The Harder The Twinge, The Faster The Strive, The Force Of Humanity Sought In The Memories, As well As The Laughter At Times-
But Who Would Of Known It Was After My Pride? To See Strictly If My Functions Were Stable, Cleanin' The Disaster I Cried-
It was, In fact A Surprise, When I Opened My Eyes, I Felt Betrayed By My Own Acts, Hopeless That I, Had No Emotion To Cry-
But If My Touch Was Gone, And Their Was Somethin' Wrong, Than How Would I Pinky Swear, Pick A Fear, For My Touch To Form?-
I Must've Sworn, The Day, Night In The Dusk Before, This Came Upon My Feelings To Just Effortlessly Have My Brains Structure Torn-
It Was The Storm, Of The Real An The Fake, My Forces Fightin' On Each Side To Determine The Destination For Concealin' My Fait-
Now I Ask You As You're Hearin' Me Say, I Speak To Myself With No Mercy, My Mind Is Lethal In State-
It Can See Through The Traits, That People Will Make, It Can Be A Piece Of Your Strength, From The People You Hate!-
Or The Reachable Plate, In The Evil You Ate! Just To Keep You Awake, For The Sequal Of Faith!-
I'm Past The Gimmicks, Now Finally My Eyes Open With Pride, Because I'm Openin' Wide, Because Fun Comes After Business-
And In Order To Enjoy Later, I Have To Finish, What I Started In My Life Story, After I Wrote A New Chapter In It!-
So I'll Sit Back An Witness, My Liability Of My Major Mistakes, As It's Gainin' To Make, Me Wanna Be Disabled Or Break!-
It's Makin' Me Shake, You Can See The Pain On My Face, I'm Sufferin' For Servin' Criticism, That In Reverse I Wasn't Able To Take!-
But Now I Stay In My Place, As Slowly It Drifts Through And Back, An Ocean Shore, Of Emotions Pour Indistinctively Right Through My Back-
But It's Alot Less Stressful, So No More Of This Confusing Rap, I Thought Before I Spoke, And That's What Artificially Made My Realness A Proven Fact
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Emotion, Devotion Trapped In My Mind, A Given Whiplash From Embarrassment-
Incessantly Tingles Through The Back Of My Spine-
The Harder The Twinge, The Faster The Strive, The Force Of Humanity Sought In The Memories, As well As The Laughter At Times-
But Who Would Of Known It Was After My Pride? To See Strictly If My Functions Were Stable, Cleanin' The Disaster I Cried-
It was, In fact A Surprise, When I Opened My Eyes, I Felt Betrayed By My Own Acts, Hopeless That I, Had No Emotion To Cry-
But If My Touch Was Gone, And Their Was Somethin' Wrong, Than How Would I Pinky Swear, Pick A Fear, For My Touch To Form?-
I Must've Sworn, The Day, Night In The Dusk Before, This Came Upon My Feelings To Just Effortlessly Have My Brains Structure Torn-
It Was The Storm, Of The Real An The Fake, My Forces Fightin' On Each Side To Determine The Destination For Concealin' My Fait-
Now I Ask You As You're Hearin' Me Say, I Speak To Myself With No Mercy, My Mind Is Lethal In State-
It Can See Through The Traits, That People Will Make, It Can Be A Piece Of Your Strength, From The People You Hate!-
Or The Reachable Plate, In The Evil You Ate! Just To Keep You Awake, For The Sequal Of Faith!-
I'm Past The Gimmicks, Now Finally My Eyes Open With Pride, Because I'm Openin' Wide, Because Fun Comes After Business-
And In Order To Enjoy Later, I Have To Finish, What I Started In My Life Story, After I Wrote A New Chapter In It!-
So I'll Sit Back An Witness, My Liability Of My Major Mistakes, As It's Gainin' To Make, Me Wanna Be Disabled Or Break!-
It's Makin' Me Shake, You Can See The Pain On My Face, I'm Sufferin' For Servin' Criticism, That In Reverse I Wasn't Able To Take!-
But Now I Stay In My Place, As Slowly It Drifts Through And Back, An Ocean Shore, Of Emotions Pour Indistinctively Right Through My Back-
But It's Alot Less Stressful, So No More Of This Confusing Rap, I Thought Before I Spoke, And That's What Artificially Made My Realness A Proven Fact