View Full Version : **New Song Ill Defined - Don't Test Us"**
Trigga T
01-11-2004, 07:50 PM
yo Mane this is our newest song we recorded for our mixtape! we
still lookin for peeps to drop on it! but its got our boy DA Kingpin on it wit us only his 2nd time
rappin! Hott Shit leave some feedback mane! It's called "Don't Test Us"
Verse 1:
Trigga-T
Hook: Trigga-T
Verse 2: Da Kingpin
Hook
Verse 3:
K-OtiK
Hook
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JCThugsta
01-11-2004, 09:03 PM
this beat is hott yall, feelin it fa
sho, trigga ur verse is too simple mang, and ur lyrics are average, u should mix up ur flows,
kingpin....same exact flow as trigga, yall just flow line afta line, yall need to mix it up and spice
that shit up, not bad for ur 2nd time tho, the hook is ok...real simple type shit, monotone on that
hook too, spice that fuckin shit up goddamnit, im gettin pissed, aight kotik, nice verse dawg,
nice flows on it, im feelin the fast flows when u mix that shit up, overall...fo reals get me excited
mix that shit up, pz
K-OtiK
01-12-2004, 03:49 AM
Thanx Yall! I honestly was feelin
this whole joint! I originally wasnt supposed to be in it! It was just Trigga-T & Kingpin! I heard
it mane I was like WTF I WANT IN! LOL! But madd propz to Kingpin on his 2nd time!
iLL Defined ~1~
ROACHEDEMON
01-12-2004, 08:58 AM
Beat is ok
Verse 1:
Trigga-T...take it in the tushy..lol that was funny, nice flow for this beat.
Hook:
Trigga-T...once again i like your style on this beat
Verse 2: Da Kingpin...lol you say some
funny shit in there
Hook
Verse 3: K-OtiK...nice fast flow, still waitin fo yo ass to finish ur
verse on our joint
Hook
KraYzieWuN
01-12-2004, 01:40 PM
nice shit mang! i like your verse
too!! lol. real tight tho... holla.....
Lethal Invation
01-12-2004, 01:41 PM
GOT DAWM this be fire str8 out
of hell lol beat its raw flows be raw all came out to an Ill Defined Hotness...............Lethal
EScoTT
01-12-2004, 03:59 PM
Trigga T - shit sounded
aight..need to work on the flow..always sounding the same...liked the lyrics...
Chorus - nice
lyrics..not feelin it tho...some reaon dont know..too plain.
King Pin sound the same as
trigga...lyrics were coo, funny..
K-otik.. nice lyrics...fast parts sound good..other parts
sound like trigga and king...
K-OtiK
01-13-2004, 03:45 AM
LOL! Roach man I gotchu! Im
ready to record mane! I'll just wait for Lethal! :D But Mane it's commin soon! LOL!
((sorry))
Lethal! Thanx mane! Im really glad you feelin it mane!
Escott! Yeah
we all sound similar on this beat! But yo mane you try and rap a different style to this beat! It's
kinda like this beat calls for that style!
BruthaBlakk! Thanx Mane!
iLL
Defined ~1~
los226
01-13-2004, 10:09 AM
I ain't feelin this fo real ya'll,
don't take this as hatin i'm just tellin ya'll my opinion. All of ya'll rhyme scheme gotta be
worked on big time. All ya'll have no emotion, the whole thing sounded boring. The last guy
tryna rap fast, i wasn't fellin that at all. Chorus was buku simple and not catchy at all. A chorus
is meant to stand out on a track make heads start bobbin. Lyrics need to be worked on.......
EScoTT
01-13-2004, 10:12 AM
Ya i feel ya on what ya said
.....KO
los226
01-13-2004, 10:23 AM
Escott! Yeah we all sound similar on this beat! But yo mane
you try and rap a different style to this beat! It's kinda like this beat calls for that style!
I'll put you up on that offer, I myself really don't rap, but I
could rip that beat with a different "style". I'll write sum'n to that beat 2morrow and record it
Thursday. Pz
K-OtiK
01-13-2004, 02:25 PM
I'll put you up on that offer, I myself really don't rap, but I
could rip that beat with a different "style". I'll write sum'n to that beat 2morrow and record it
Thursday. Pz
Um! Ok! Whatever you say! I really dont care
if you could bring a different style! Ok thats just the way I felt and that's how I wrote!
Redrum! Thanx Alot Mane! Much Luv To Yall Renegades! ~1~
K-OtiK
01-14-2004, 03:53 AM
UP
los226
01-14-2004, 08:23 AM
Um! Ok! Whatever you say! I really dont care if you could
bring a different style! Ok thats just the way I felt and that's how I wrote!
lol.....
K-OtiK
01-15-2004, 03:43 AM
HaHa! Thanx Skeem! We need
to collab sumtime! :D
M.A.C.
01-15-2004, 06:35 AM
yo wut no limit beat iz this? its
hot.....1st verse wuz hot, i liked da flow u used....chorus iz koo, hard 2 distinguise it from the
verses for some reason tho....2nd verse wuz tite, real good for 2nd time....kotik, ya verse wuz
tite, that fast flow caught me by surprise but it sounded real tite...overall tite drop yall..1ne
Trigga T
01-15-2004, 12:15 PM
yea it sounds monotonus cuz the
2nd dude kinda sound like me! lol but when me and k-otik are together by ourselves it sounds
good cuz we got 2 different styles so its a big switch up lol! and it aint the same flow through
the whole song! thanks y'all! 1
K-OtiK
01-15-2004, 01:14 PM
Yeah Thanx MAC! Im glad yall
feelin this shit! :D
Thanx Enigma!
O yeah! It's the C-Murder "Down Fo My
Niggaz" beat!
M.A.C.
01-15-2004, 04:46 PM
fuck them other n*ggaz cuz im
down 4 my n*ggaz..
fuck them other n*ggaz cuz im down 4 my n*ggaz..
fuck them other
n*ggaz i ride 4 my n*ggaz i die 4 my n*ggaz,
fuck them other n*ggaz
hhaha fo sho
K-OtiK
01-15-2004, 06:28 PM
LMAO...yup thats it
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