Triple Darkness - Comin' Up From Da Darkness Revisited

[Dillahmac]

Since a lot of folks didn't like the first one I
updated it. It's on geoshites so u know tha deal. It if don't show up, u gotta wait an
hour.
http://www.geocities.com/d_rockafella1/Triple-Darkness-CUFDD.t
xt

[G®åfhïkúl]

i see that you like to bevel your
text alot, try messing around with other ways to enchance your images appeal, and stay away
from bevels unless its just absolutly needed or has to be used. Other than that the edge of the
people doesnt blend down with the background to well, it sort of makes it look like they are
cardboard cut-outs due to the contrasting colors, try soft blending those edges and add a
shadow to help establish a direct difference of vizual from the people to the background. If you
complete this correctly it will make the people gradually blend down. I would also suggest that
you bring the initial title of the album down by 10-15 pixels so it wont look so close to the
images border, and about the feature of artist area I would move that right under the title of the
album so that way it strikes the eyes better, by doing this you can move the Parental Advisory
sign to the bottom left or right corner, to help the design flow better with eachother rather than
against. All in all this graphic has much potential keep up the work.