View Full Version : Round 1 battle 4 Boss Smoke v. J-Burna<---W
05-29-2007, 02:19 PM
8 Bars = 16 Lines (Min/Max)
Boss Smoke Drops First
Check-In Before June, 1
Battler has 48 Hours to Drop Verse after Check-In
Failure to Check-In or Drop Verse before Deadline
Results in No-Show
Feed/Flip is allowed, obviously only the second to drop will be able to do so. However, If you proceed, you wil have the opposite advantage in round 2
05-29-2007, 03:38 PM
Gay faggot, I'll fuckin' hurt ya and straight murk ya//
Turn ya skin inside out 'til it urks ya, tell you the J-burned ya//
Bitch, I'll fucking slit your throat into a columbian neck-tie//
Pull your tongue down ya chest so you feel what ya head taste like//
Stick a dildo up ya ass and slip a straw in ya dick//
Make you drink your own piss 'til cum trickles from ya lips//
Infect you 'til the sickle cells your sense and your stomach explodes//
Defect in your brain when the neurons are exposed and summon the chodes//
And when I nail the tacs in ya head and place some chips to be sure//
So everytime you think- your mind short circuits due to epileptic seizures//
Then the putrid vomit stains on your ego leave you speachless and thriller//
So I cut off ya nipples and break in your teeth like I was Ichi the Killer//
Believe me the villain that I'm willing to have puss sputting out your eyes//
The bile choking you alive, think I'm vile leave you in the nile with life//
So when you're getting ripped apart with water filling your hostel nostrils//
Impossible for you is a happy passing, when I have kids digging up ya fossils//
05-31-2007, 05:28 PM
05-31-2007, 06:05 PM
damn i was done with my verse and my browser fucking went back
now i got to write something else
05-31-2007, 06:37 PM
dam do dis up meng
05-31-2007, 06:41 PM
Boss Smoke? ill set you up with more cocks then jayna oso//
you done getting gang raped? ill grab you into a chokehold//
shove corkscrews down ya blow hole, set you up with a chrome deepthroat//
since you done with cum, ill turn you into a led hoe soul//
fuck it ill consume ya blood then give a acid bath like i was John Haigh//*
or maybe ill just blast ya away then chainsaw massacre ya like Ed Gein//**
forgot tha water i got some head paint, ill leave ya head slain//
dissect ya vertebrate, open up your crane-ium then i scramble ya brains//
razor blades slicing through each and every one of your veins, blood spraying//
cut into your cornia let tha puss ooze out untill i refrain from playing//
take your hacked limbs up out of their chains i go psycho cuz im loving tha taste//
peel tha flesh away eat tha muscle and brains but ima let tha rest decay//
sanity depraved, ill wrap up tha rest and freeze ya for later like a bore//
gut ya up and empty tha organs keep em in a clear jar for store//
you only talk shit but i live what i spit in this, my journal of horrocores//
silly faggot, im tha reason they invented tha genre of horror for//
*= John Haigh(as in hey) is a famous acid bath murder who would drain blood from his victims and then bathe them in acid.
**= Ed Gein is the all-famous chainsaw massacre psychopathic murder.
edit= addition of explanations
05-31-2007, 06:45 PM
also, nice drop boss smoke.
05-31-2007, 07:28 PM
you too homie.
Let's get some votes :nod:
06-01-2007, 01:19 AM
Well, first... Ed Geins isn't the "chainsaw massacre killer." The chainsaw massacre murderer, Leatherface isn't a real person, actually. The character is based SLIGHTLY off Ed Geins, who is someone who lived in Wisconsin, robbed graves, killed a few people (not with chainsaws, specifically), fucked corpses and ate people.
Copied from http://www.snopes.com/movies/films/chainsaw.asp
Gein's story inspired (at least in part) the Norman Bates character <NOBR>— a</NOBR> young man who murders women out of a twisted sense of loyalty to his dead mother — in the classic thriller Psycho, and the Buffalo Bill character <NOBR>— a</NOBR> transvestite serial killer who murders women to make use of their skin <NOBR>— in</NOBR> the horror novel Silence of the Lambs. Although the Leatherface character and the events depicted in The Texas Chainsaw Massacre differ in many substantial ways from what is known about the life and activities of Ed Gein (most notably in that Gein was apparently far more a grave robber than a murderer, and he didn't go around slicing up live victims with a chainsaw), there are definite similarities between the film and the Ed Gein story as well (e.g., hanging a murder victim's corpse in the house, making functional use of the skin from dead bodies, elements of cannibalism). Whether these similiarities are sufficiently close to justify the statement that The Texas Chainsaw Massacre was "based on a true story" is up to filmgoers to decide for themselves.
NOW, that aside, for being just more "horrorcore" altogether, my vote goes, nonetheless to
06-01-2007, 04:52 AM
ya both had good verses at first i thought i was gone be votin for boss but i admit when i read that shit j-burna dropped that shit was more graphic and violent so like hollow said his was more horrorcore.
06-01-2007, 10:27 AM
Ok this I read over a few times, hard decision.
But I think Im gonna have to give it to Boss..
As I read the verses over, J had a very weak opener, hit hard in the middle, and a very weak closer. While Boss on the other hand stayed strong the whole way through. J might've been more horrorcore in those few middle bars, it still didn't stick out enough to top Boss' verse. So with that being said..
VOTE - Boss
*Great job both of you guys, good luck*
06-01-2007, 01:36 PM
2 -to- 1 for J-BURNA!
06-01-2007, 01:48 PM
man i didnt think i would see such a close battle and i didnt think i would see sum1 new do as well as u did J...
but.....boss stayed more consistent throughtout..so he wins
06-01-2007, 06:36 PM
Wow, really close battle. Uhm, Boss, your stuff always flows great. Your use of multies and alliteration helps a lot. J-burna, no disrespect, but i did not ecpect this to be so close. You surprised me (thats a good thing). I'm going to have to say J's was more horrocore than Boss's.
vote = J-Burna
06-01-2007, 07:35 PM
3 -to- 2 = J WINS
Damn good battle, people.
06-01-2007, 10:14 PM
thank you for all the votes.
also for the feedback.
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