Winner----->Appletondon vs. Revolutionary<-------Scar

[AppletonDon]

House Rules:
Each nominated battle will be of the following format:
Challenger goes first
1 round
16-18 LINES
3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO
First to 5 wins, must win by 2 or more votes
People must have at least 100 posts in order to vote
Both battlers must agree to the challenge before it is started

Appletondon is lower on the ladder than Revolutionary, so he must go first

Appletondon you have 48 hours to reply
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[Longway]

I have fixed it for you but next time just wait for us to do it--- Its hard to keep track of stuff unless its done from start to finish. If you guys start making battles we will not track it correctly. Sorry for the pain but its not an easy process

[AppletonDon]

aight ima drop first thing tomorrow

[AppletonDon]

ok da rev done ran his mouth so don gon let the tech blow//
Bullets will touchdown on ya like the ol school tecmo//
You bout to get served the shells and i aint talkin bout no velveeta//
Im good with my hand game but also solid with the heater//
Nigga call himself revolutionary, nigga u nothin but a riot//
Ran through those back in the day so dont even try it//(check my old battle with riotz)
Back to spit this flame rearrange your frame so fool drop the name//
The boy Scarface done retired dawg u need to do the same//
Sendin shots ur way fuckin up your whole puerto rican day parade//(check his sig)
Ya little ol school raps is outdated while u gettin played like spades//
Ya so im lower on the ladder send 17 shots straight through ya bladder//
Now fall off ya petistol leave ya stinkin like fecal matter//
Snatch ya chain u aint got diamonds on ya neck u aint smitty//
9 shots layin ya whole unit down g u aint fifty//(50 cent for thos not in the know)
you beatin me, is just like ya name revolution itll neva happen//
hollow points have ya bones twist and crunch like the captain//(captain crunch)
Man im finished eating this so called wanna be mc//
So now ima shit you out step ya game up next time u wanna battle me//

[Revolutionary]

ok , im sick of niggaz gangsta rappin when they not gansta livin/
ya flows wack.. at this point u should consider quittin/
ya spittin rhymes you jus cant deliver/
u goin up a stone cold flow thatll make you shiver/
u speak of hollow points, but if set foot in my hood ull get smoked quicker than a joint
in a 6 man cypher/
rhymes like a biological attack, theyll make u sick man.. accurate like a sniper/
ull lose wit everything u ever wrote against one of my bars/
a verse will end ya carreer, transport it in a hearst to tha MC graveyard/
nigga dis aint even a battle, u like a fish outta water/
dis like shootin fish in a barrel/
cuz u soft.. sweet like a strawberry, must b coked up like darrel/(darell strawbery)
my rhymes got ya head spinnin and ya brain rattled/
splatter ya insides out all over the ground, leave ya heart and soul shatterd/
like marino wit no super bowl, crush ya dreams, now u heartless/(dan marino)
spineless, u think u could see me but u blinded, go up agains me u get tha boot like handicap parkin/(parkin in a handicap zone u get a boot on ur car)
now i got u on ya dying breath like u got aids, leavin u burnt like u was sparking/(wen u catch a std u got "burnt")

[Hollow]

OPENER: Don (For originality)
CLOSER: Rev (For originality)
FLOW: Don
MULTIS: Rev
WORDPLAY: Don
NAMEPLAY: Don
META-SIMILIES: Rev
PUNCHES: Don (Rev jus' talked down to him, but never really hit him with anything)
HUMOR: Don
CREATIVITY: Rev (Almost tied, in my eyes)

(Bonus Point)
FAVORITE LINE: Rev: (u speak of hollow points, but if set foot in my hood ull get smoked quicker than a joint in a 6 man cypher// rhymes like a biological attack, theyll make u sick man.. accurate like a sniper//)

TOTAL:
-Don: 6
-Rev: 5

WINNER: AppletonDon

I was pretty impressed by this battle and how close it was; actually, just at glancing over the verses, I thought I'd end up givin' it to Rev. Wasn't 'til I actually counted up the points that I found out that Don had my vote. Props people.

[Revolutionary]

c mon lets get some fuckin votes

[Boss_Smoke]

AppleDon

ok da rev done ran his mouth so don gon let the tech blow//
Bullets will touchdown on ya like the ol school tecmo//
2/2 --- good opener / punch
You bout to get served the shells and i aint talkin bout no velveeta//
Im good with my hand game but also solid with the heater//
1/2 --- filler
Nigga call himself revolutionary, nigga u nothin but a riot//
Ran through those back in the day so dont even try it//(check my old battle with riotz)
1/2 --- started off well, but ended self-praising
Back to spit this flame rearrange your frame so fool drop the name//
The boy Scarface done retired dawg u need to do the same//
Sendin shots ur way fuckin up your whole puerto rican day parade//(check his sig)
Ya little ol school raps is outdated while u gettin played like spades//
4/4 --- I love the set, great flow, personal
Ya so im lower on the ladder send 17 shots straight through ya bladder//
Now fall off ya petistol leave ya stinkin like fecal matter//
1/2 --- nah, not sure what you were going for with this
Snatch ya chain u aint got diamonds on ya neck u aint smitty//
9 shots layin ya whole unit down g u aint fifty//(50 cent for thos not in the know)
2/2 --- that was a good bar, with a good punch and flow
you beatin me, is just like ya name revolution itll neva happen//
hollow points have ya bones twist and crunch like the captain//(captain crunch)
1/2 --- wack punch attempt
Man im finished eating this so called wanna be mc//
So now ima shit you out step ya game up next time u wanna battle me//
0/2 --- that was a weak closer

AppleDon --- 12/18 --- 67%

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Revolutionary

ok , im sick of niggaz gangsta rappin when they not gansta livin/
ya flows wack.. at this point u should consider quittin/
2/2 --- this was a good opener, with great flow
ya spittin rhymes you jus cant deliver/
u goin up a stone cold flow thatll make you shiver/
1/2 --- that was wack, and the flow was off
u speak of hollow points, but if set foot in my hood ull get smoked quicker than a joint
in a 6 man cypher/
rhymes like a biological attack, theyll make u sick man.. accurate like a sniper/
1/2 --- 1st was good, 2nd would've been good, but ended up a filler
ull lose wit everything u ever wrote against one of my bars/
a verse will end ya carreer, transport it in a hearst to tha MC graveyard/
2/2 --- good bar, flow, and punch
nigga dis aint even a battle, u like a fish outta water/
0/1 --- doesn't rhyme with anything
dis like shootin fish in a barrel/
cuz u soft.. sweet like a strawberry, must b coked up like darrel/(darell strawbery)
1/2 --- ehh, its a punch attempt, but not very good
my rhymes got ya head spinnin and ya brain rattled/
splatter ya insides out all over the ground, leave ya heart and soul shatterd/
2/2 --- great flow, and the punch was there
like marino wit no super bowl, crush ya dreams, now u heartless/(dan marino)
spineless, u think u could see me but u blinded, go up agains me u get tha boot like handicap parkin/(parkin in a handicap zone u get a boot on ur car)
now i got u on ya dying breath like u got aids, leavin u burnt like u was sparking/(wen u catch a std u got "burnt")
2/3 --- this was a closer, but the mid-line wasn't much
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Revolutionary --- 11/16 --- 69%
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VOTE --- REVOLUTIONARY

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[Vega/Set]

2-1 rev up

[Vega/Set]

Opener- Appletondon
Punches- Rev
Flow- Appletondon
Multies- Appletondon
Wordplay- none
Nameplay- none
Similies/Meta's- Rev
Personals- Appletondon
Creativity- Rev
Humor- none
Closure- Rev
Enjoyment- Rev

Overall- 5-4 Rev

Vote -- Rev



This was a good battle...u 2 are good rivals...but i think the only thang needed more in this battle was originality...other than that u2 did jus fine....great battle guys

[AppletonDon]

i respect the votes but i honestlt feel i was alot more creative than dude and had better punces like hollow said not to take anything away from rev

[aLiAs R.I.P.08]

Opener- Appletondon
Punches- Rev
Flow- Appletondon
Multies- none
Wordplay- none
Nameplay- none
Similies/Meta's- Rev
Personals- Appletondon
Creativity- none
Humor- none
Closure- Rev
Enjoyment- Appletondon
Overall- 3-4 Appletondon

Favorite Lines:

Don:
The boy Scarface done retired dawg u need to do the same//
Sendin shots ur way fuckin up your whole puerto rican day parade//

Vote -- Appletondon

***good battle guys, nice solid verses, keep it up

[Vega/Set]

3-2 rev still up

[E-Rip]

Opener- Don
Punches- Don
Flow- Don
Multies- None
Wordplay- None
Nameplay- None
Similies/Meta's- Rev
Personals- Don
Creativity- Rev
Humor- None
Closure- Rev
Enjoyment- Don
Favorite Lines:

Don: Back to spit this flame rearrange your frame so fool drop the name//
The boy Scarface done retired dawg u need to do the same//
Sendin shots ur way fuckin up your whole puerto rican day parade//(check his sig)
Ya little ol school raps is outdated while u gettin played like spades//

Rev: ok , im sick of niggaz gangsta rappin when they not gansta livin/
ya flows wack.. at this point u should consider quittin/

cuz u soft.. sweet like a strawberry, must b coked up like darrel/(darell strawbery)


Overall- 5-3 Don

Vote -- Don

**Great battle both of you, I felt that Don came stronger in this and hit harder. Rev came hard but it just wasn't enough, props to both of you on this battle, good job. :thumbup:

[Vega/Set]

3-3 tie

[AppletonDon]

lets get some more votes

[Revolutionary]

good battle son ^.... lets do it again sumtime

[AppletonDon]

no doubt

[AppletonDon]

yo wassup with the votes when is decision gonna be made

[sikwitit]

<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p><o:p>The Don-<o:p></o:p>
ok da rev done ran his mouth so don gon let the tech blow//
Bullets will touchdown on ya like the ol school tecmo//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not bad, I like the punch but a better set up woulds got ya two.
You bout to get served the shells and i aint talkin bout no velveeta//
Im good with my hand game but also solid with the heater//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Nice lines but the punch isn’t very strong. Nice! But not a strong punch.
Nigga call himself revolutionary, nigga u nothin but a riot//
Ran through those back in the day so dont even try it//(check my old battle with riotz)<o:p></o:p>
2/2- Even though it’s more of a person against Riotz, I like the name correlation.
Back to spit this flame rearrange your frame so fool drop the name//
The boy Scarface done retired dawg u need to do the same//
1/2- Seemed almost like nice fillers.<o:p></o:p>
Sendin shots ur way fuckin up your whole puerto rican day parade//(check his sig)
Ya little ol school raps is outdated while u gettin played like spades//
1/2- I like the first line A LOT, just wish you would knocked it out the park with the punch.<o:p></o:p>
Ya so im lower on the ladder send 17 shots straight through ya bladder//
Now fall off ya petistol leave ya stinkin like fecal matter//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- it’s aight but nothin solid
Snatch ya chain u aint got diamonds on ya neck u aint smitty//
9 shots layin ya whole unit down g u aint fifty//(50 cent for thos not in the know)
2/2- Haha, I really like these lines. Funny shit mayn!<o:p></o:p>
you beatin me, is just like ya name revolution itll neva happen//
hollow points have ya bones twist and crunch like the captain//(captain crunch)
1/2- <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on">Lot</st1:place> of potential there, I think you should worded it differently<o:p></o:p>
Man im finished eating this so called wanna be mc//
So now ima shit you out step ya game up next time u wanna battle me//<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not bad but you need to bring the pain on the closing punch mayn!<o:p></o:p>
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11/18 = 61%<o:p></o:p>
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Rev-<o:p></o:p>
ok , im sick of niggaz gangsta rappin when they not gansta livin/
ya flows wack.. at this point u should consider quittin/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Pretty nice. I probably would give to if this weren’t the opener
ya spittin rhymes you jus cant deliver/
u goin up a stone cold flow thatll make you shiver/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- Not workin for me mayn. Not much substance here
u speak of hollow points, but if set foot in my hood ull get smoked quicker than a joint
in a 6 man cypher/
rhymes like a biological attack, theyll make u sick man.. accurate like a sniper/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- not bad but the first line was way to long and just killed the flow
ull lose wit everything u ever wrote against one of my bars/
a verse will end ya carreer, transport it in a hearst to tha MC graveyard/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- it’s aight, needs more “punch” though
nigga dis aint even a battle, u like a fish outta water/
dis like shootin fish in a barrel/
cuz u soft.. sweet like a strawberry, must b coked up like darrel/(darell strawbery)<o:p></o:p>
1/3- I liked the name play in the last line but not much goin on in the first 2
my rhymes got ya head spinnin and ya brain rattled/
splatter ya insides out all over the ground, leave ya heart and soul shatterd/<o:p></o:p>
1/2- I like what you’re sayin but you need somethin more direct and personal
like marino wit no super bowl, crush ya dreams, now u heartless/(dan marino)
spineless, u think u could see me but u blinded, go up agains me u get tha boot like handicap parkin/(parkin in a handicap zone u get a boot on ur car)<o:p></o:p>
now i got u on ya dying breath like u got aids, leavin u burnt like u was sparking/(wen u catch a std u got "burnt")<o:p></o:p>
<!-- / message --><!-- edit note -->2/3- Haha like the second line a lot… shit made me laugh!<o:p></o:p>
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8/16 = 50%


Vote- The Don


Good job fellas!<o:p></o:p>
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[AppletonDon]

can we get some sort of conclusion to this battle its been open for bout a month now

[Vega/Set]

im try n find a deciding voter wen i get home....unless sum1 who hasnt voted on this votes before that....

[Revolutionary]

vote god dammit

[krayz1e b1zzy]

Opener- Don
Punches- Don
Flow- REV
Multies- None
Wordplay- None
Nameplay- None
Similies/Meta's- Don
Personals- Don
Creativity- Rev
Humor- Don
Closure- Rev
Enjoyment- Don

Rev's verse flowed a lil better than apple's , which made it easier to read. but on the other hand apple's punches were better (rev i really didnt see too many) and his verse had a little more humor so appletondon takes my vote...good battle

[AppletonDon]

thanx 4 da vote krayzie can we get this closed now mods