Ness vs. Hollow<<------WInner

[<NESS>]

yea yea u already know im bout to post.

rememba 16 lines

[Longway]

this will be a battle

[<NESS>]

hey mister thug, how u doin punk bitch?//
how does it feel, to stay wack, and neva rhyme fa one shit?//
i guess not to good cause u flew away like a bird//
and i put my dick in ur ear, so nigga fuck wat u heard//
ness, comin to destroy ya trully kibosh if ya bring issue//
give bitches tuberculosis, yes i fucked up his tissues//
now i go threw ya lungs, and leave ya wit no air so dont try ta breath//
leave ya wit such short of air than wen u breath, u sneas//
u get it buster? u never was no hustler, plus u a sucker//
cause u suck up all our rhymes and refine em u mutherfukker//
now maybe in certain parts of my rhyme u got misled//
but in that hollow dome of urs, well fit 10 million dicks,u feel me dick head?//
and u battling freeda5th is ur return?//
well turn back mutha fukka cause right here ul get burnt//
so this was a pleasure, hope u know wat im about//
but i hope never to see u again, so dont bother tellin us wen ur next movie's comin out//(the hollow man movie)lol im wack


lol u will destroy me, but go ahead drop

[Longway]

bright side atleast you did not use the swallow punch haha-- old cats will know what i mean

[Hollow]

You typed 8 bars, didn't know this thug'd have ya ass beat/
I did three months; this "one line's is harder than ya rap sheet"/
Usin' these lyrics is the closest I'd try to ever hit a bitch/
This boy's playin' "head-games"; but I won't let him near my dick/
Me replyin' to you! The only time any clever shit's said/
You mislead me, you're fault; "Point blank~ I never mis-lead"/
You play wit' me, you play for keeps~ Real G's leave niggaz dead for less/
Hope you gotta "heart o' gold" 'cause I'm finna rip open ya "treasure chest"/
You the sixth dawg, huh? Well sorry, but I've already beaten Free in the past/
So you can call me "Top Dawg" the way I'm everyday leadin' the pack/
You wouldn't throw a punch one on one if we really were made to fight/
An' "you couldn't make me swallow LED" if you force fed me laser lights/
Broke motha'fucker; nothin' bout depression when you "down in the dumpster"/
Ain't been stabbed in 4 months, but I guarantee that "I jus' found me a punk, sure"/
On a last note, they say that God's perfect; but, really, if that's a case/
Look at NESS; how can God be perfect if he made such a bad mistake?/




Sorry, just got back for a while.... Woooooow. I missed bein' out. :D

[krayz1e b1zzy]

Opener-None
Punches-Hollow
Flow-Hollow
Multies-Ness
Wordplay-Hollow
Nameplay-None
Similies/Meta's-Hollow
Personals-None
Creativity-Hollow
Humor-Ness
Closure-Hollow
Enjoyment-Hollow

Favorite Lines:
* I did three months; this "one line's is harder than ya rap sheet"/
* Usin' these lyrics is the closest I'd try to ever hit a bitch/
* You mislead me, you're fault; "Point blank~ I never mis-lead"/
* An' "you couldn't make me swallow LED" if you force fed me laser lights/
Over-All = 7/2

Yo ness my dude i know for a fact u could do way better. Hollow just came way stronger in this one he basically came with stronger punchlines and his flow was on point, Ness i read your other battles and this one it didnt seem like you came with the heat like the others. Welcome back hollow, u been gone for a minute.

Vote =Hollow

[Hollow]

Thanks, man. Glad to be outta jail. I been on pretty heavy today. But, I don't think I'll be on quite as much as I used to be. Anyway...

VOTES:
1 - Hollow
0 - NESS

[Kurruption]

^^^^ What did you do to get on lockup, hallow

[Kurruption]

Opener-hallow
Punches-hallow
Flow-hallow
Multies-tie
Wordplay-hallow
Nameplay-ness
Similes/Meta's-hallow
Personals- tie
Creativity- hallow
Humor- ness
Closure- hallow
Enjoyment- hallow

LMAO on how Ness assumed he was gonna lose.:rofl: Yall both had nice verses, but Ness you should have tossed some more catchy punchlines in there just in case this was gonna happen. To Hallow, nice counter attack. And welcome back.

Vote= Hallow

[Hollow]

Thanks, people for the votes and welcome backs. 2 - 0 me.

Kurrupt, I was in for a bunch of shit I didn't do and a couple things I did do. lol

[Vega/Set]

On some real shit--i dont kno if ness knew who he was up against cuz honestly it seemed like he was laccin in his verse or it might have been rushed idk...but hollow's verse beat ness' in all categories..so he gets my vote...way to bring that fiya my nig...

--and to ness...take ya time next go homie, focus on sik punches n personals..


3-0 hollow wins good battle guys

[Hollow]

Good battle, man.

[<NESS>]

hell yea thanx, i kinda rushed on tha verse and also slacked, i knew hollow was nice i wanted to try out on good battlers, oh wells thanx yall. jus gotta keep on trying