Young Eternal V. Vega/Set<---W

[Verbal Artistry]

Horrocore
10-12 lines
Drop once you've finished your verse
Votes without an explanation will not count whether theyre for me or Set

[Verbal Artistry]

Checkin in

[Verbal Artistry]

Hope this verse is horrocore enough, never tried it before

A Dark Soul - Blacker Than Charred Coal//
Hollower Than The Holes That I'm Drillin Into Your Skull//

The Bit Steadily Spinnin - Drill Steadily Diggin//
Your Screams Dramatically Rissen, For Me There's Music In 'Em//

Only Keepin You Alive Cause Your Shrieks Give Me A High//
Tore The Lids Off Of Your Eyes So No Pain Would Be a Surprise//

Through Your Arms, Crooked Nails -You're Hung To A Rusty Rail//
Collecting Your Blood As Well, A Drink For My Hounds From Hell//

Ordered To Feed On Your Legs, Workin To The Bone Through Your Flesh//
I'ma Keep Your Wounds Fresh - Pourin Salt Were You have Blead//

For You This Is Torture - For Me This Is Pleasure//
My Soul Blacker Than Ever But Blood Has Never Tasted Better//

[Vega/Set]

"--" means your supposed to pause




Tied up with a whack verse, so i rope u into a black hearse
begin to slit the creases in ya skin wit acid immursed
but thats just the first--gouge ur eyes out wit a dull knife till they burst
shit call the nurse, im takin a hammer, slammin ya balls now
take a lighter next to ya nuts till they look like a black cloud,
oops i think one popped out--put it on a hook for bait, now u my prize trout
boy dont get loud....fuck it i'll just take out ya vocal chords
now rap me another whack verse to put on another social board.....
let u fuck a bitch wit aids and other diseases till u no longer hold it,
then piss on ya face so u can get a taste of whats really gold-en
shit where eyes used to be then have my bitch mold it into snow-men
i make masterpieces, got you matchin ya verses......its finally showin...

[The Seeker Of Truth]

Hmm,whats the voting structure again? Havent done this in a while,and im not famaliar with the Horrorcore rules/structure.Help me out and ill make a vote.

[Vega/Set]

for horrorcore there is no set voting structure yet cuz its a lil different from a reg battle....from what i understand the winner is determined by who has the most horrifying verse while still dissin the opponet..the most digusting nasty grotesque etc etc verse..i mean u can still judge on flow and all that other shit but in the end i think the majority of it has to go to the "horror" part of the verse..

[The Seeker Of Truth]

for horrorcore there is no set voting structure yet cuz its a lil different from a reg battle....from what i understand the winner is determined by who has the most horrifying verse while still dissin the opponet..the most digusting nasty grotesque etc etc verse..i mean u can still judge on flow and all that other shit but in the end i think the majority of it has to go to the "horror" part of the verse..


Aight then,hmm...


Young Eternal-Ur verse was great.It was very poetic and simply displayed lyrical greatness.The flow was damn near flawless as well.I rapped it out loud to get a feel and i felt like it was my own rap,so the flow was perfect.Also kept it very disgusting as well,Horrorcore with a poetic twist.


Vega-Another great verse.Your verse wasnt as poetic as Young Eternal's,nor was the flow as perfect (though the flow was close to perfect anyway),but i think u had him with multies and the disgusting aspect of things.You just seemed to hit harder with ur sick lyrics then he did,his felt more in general,while urs felt more personal,towards him.

Vote-Vega.You win in my book cuz u simply came sicker with the lyrics and hit him harder with them.If this was a normal battle,it coulda went either way,but u just came a little sicker.And this is a Horrorcore battle,so thats what its about.

[Verbal Artistry]

thx for the vote

[Hollow]

Vote: Vega

Well, I wasn't overly impressed with either verse, to be perfectly honest. Both were more "horror-core-ish" than normal, but still weren't just "horror" enough... Though, from the few I've read, this is definitely the best so far.

VEGA: You pretty much hit the nail on what a horrorcore battle's supposed to be like; I jus' think what's holdin' you back is description. Don't just write about it, paint the fuckin' WHOLE pictures. That's what makes an' breaks these battles. When you can read it, then close your eyes an' see exactly what they wrote, THAT'S a perfect horrorcore battle.

ETERNAL: You had a pretty good idea of what horrorcore's supposed to be. I think you had a little more descriptive effect in your verse (slightly!). You just needed more gore, altogether.

[Verbal Artistry]

Thx for the vote, i'll remember that next time

[Boss_Smoke]

Vega/Set - yeah you had all that crazy nasty stuff that makes a horrorcore...real good descriptions and the overall criteria was filled to a very good degree...

Young Eternal - I think you had a very good idea of WHAT to do, and you did it well at times, but the consistency was off, stick with that horrorcore mentality throughout and you'll get better.

Vote - Vega

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[Verbal Artistry]

Thx and congrats Vega

[Vega/Set]

good battle YE