WINNER - Boss Smoke(3) vs. JimDaJoker(0)

[Boss_Smoke]

JimDaJoker vs. Boss Smoke

RULES

• 10 lines
• JimDaJoker drops first
• First battler to 3 votes wins
• Jim has 48 hours to drop after his check
• I have 48 hours to drop after his verse is posted

Good luck :-D

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[J-Bo]

Hi Boss,

aye aye ayeeee check check

yo boss show me your so called intellect/
after the battle your soul will be in the wreck/

in retrospect you must be a bitch wanting me with lust/
hoe if i went down on you it would be like cunnilingus/

ye the words as fast as ia can flick my tongue/
fast enough for blisters to form on my lungs/

busta in the black-n-white penetrating you thats so moist/
ya thats how i find ways to manipulate you with out my voice/

feel the negativity from my poetic incantations i casted/
but time has ends your expiration date has been outlasted/

[Boss_Smoke]

You honestly sad, man, your raps so fucking ass-- it's bad
Probably get sat on by lads cause your toilet seat rhymes is fag

Bitch, I'll hit you six times before you realize you're shitless
With ten more writ's and a dick busting your hick wishes

You dumb git, your faggot picks make you savor the thugs
And always playing gay like you was a bitch on Flavor of Love

I'm hating your plugs, you ain't making sense with any of the plenty of dumb
Lines you spittin' hittin' nothing like you was a sentry de-bugged

Dented your love, vented and prevented your ass from flappin' ya gums
I'm having your wack self quittin' before anything happened to mugs

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[J-Bo]

n1 now you guys do the vote thingy right?

[Hollow]

Flat out, no explaination necessary...

VOTE = BOSS

[Vega/Set]

but since there needs to be explantion...the reason i also vote for boss is bcuz his verse was more of a battle verse, it had disses, punches etc etc. although jim's were slightly there, it was more attempted then actually hittin. i think jim though if u stick wit it you'll get what im sayin n how u can improve...jus look at other battles if u have to.


Vote - Boss

[E-Rip]

Ok lets close this up,

Jim, your verse wasn't hittin as hard as Boss' was, his was more of a battle verse, had all the essentials as Vega mentioned. Your verse was pretty decent, needs some work, but stick around and you'll def. begin to elivate. Again, like they said, check out some other battles if you have to..and stick around, it's always cool to have more people here. But in the end Boss GMV

Vote- Boss

[J-Bo]

thks for the advice guys

[k b z]

JimDaJoker's punches .. weren't even punching. He just went on and on about nothing and the hardest thing he said was boss smoke is a bitch.

Boss Smoke had some punches so that automatically gives him the win for me.

Winner- Boss Smoke

[Hollow]

3 - 0, Boss Smoke Wins