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Old 10-18-2005, 04:25 AM
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"Ain't What I Pictured" - FIRE!!!
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"Aint What I Pictured"

this is on some like on the edge type shit / life-perspective vibe. im just like explorin how im feelin inside, feel me? check it out its only like 2 1/2 mins so dont tell me you aint got time haha
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till then im writin till i empty pens/
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they look so peaceful, finally released/
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Old 10-18-2005, 06:37 AM   #2
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This song is tight as fuck... Loving the beat and the lyricks... I prefer the first verse, sounds deeper to me... In my opinion, this is probably one of your best songs...

That said, 2min 21second, why so short? I was really waiting for the 3rd and, possibly, 4th verse.
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Old 10-18-2005, 08:16 AM   #3
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yeah - it should be a little bit longer but i dunno - thats what it is. after i finish this album ill take a look back at this track n see if i feel like adding another verse
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"Thoughts swirlin around my mind/
like a whirlwind the calm is so hard to find/
in a world when we all are blind/
and gray skies make it so damn hard to shine/
Im tempted to not attempt again/
I think i need a sign straight sent from Him/
to let me know if he can repent my sins/
till then im writin till i empty pens/
I believe the only ones free are the deceased/
they look so peaceful, finally released/
Meanwhile, were all packed in a cage/
like rats in a cage, trapped in a rage/
Actors, all trapped in a stage/
in a play that we all call "A Slap In The Face"/
We all got a part that matters/
but its hard for me to dream with a heart thats shattered/"

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Old 10-18-2005, 09:06 AM   #4
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beat is ight...really dark/deep...lyrics were strate....track is pretty coo

NOW FINISH THAT TRACK OVER MY BEAT FUCKER
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Old 10-18-2005, 12:55 PM   #5
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sounds really gangster...
the beat is tight....it is gangster too...


first verse was nice....ur voice sounds deeper on this track...sounds kinda coo...

this track is pretty good...im feelin it for the most part......

"sounds" like the type of music i would bump in my car when im in that pissed off mood...



"i dont give a motha fuck if im borin you".....i like how that sounded....

i got this shit on repeat...it got me in the mood to want to go out and knock somebody out....haha...
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Old 10-18-2005, 03:48 PM   #6
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different style Chill real dark but it sounds great lyrics are sick

tight drop man keep them comin
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Old 10-18-2005, 07:05 PM   #7
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Still listening to this song... up
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Old 10-19-2005, 01:26 AM   #8
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hahaa - good lookin yall
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"Thoughts swirlin around my mind/
like a whirlwind the calm is so hard to find/
in a world when we all are blind/
and gray skies make it so damn hard to shine/
Im tempted to not attempt again/
I think i need a sign straight sent from Him/
to let me know if he can repent my sins/
till then im writin till i empty pens/
I believe the only ones free are the deceased/
they look so peaceful, finally released/
Meanwhile, were all packed in a cage/
like rats in a cage, trapped in a rage/
Actors, all trapped in a stage/
in a play that we all call "A Slap In The Face"/
We all got a part that matters/
but its hard for me to dream with a heart thats shattered/"

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Old 10-20-2005, 12:42 PM   #9
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Tight song Chilly I'm feeling it

Keep it up!
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Old 10-20-2005, 09:26 PM   #10
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tight song Chill.. feelin this shit......!
beat and flpw and lyrics are all hot...
this shit is hot.....this is the type of shit...
i like to bump... peaceeeeee
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Old 10-21-2005, 09:09 AM   #11
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glad yall are likin it - due to the positive feedback ive looped the beat for another verse so its comin
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"Thoughts swirlin around my mind/
like a whirlwind the calm is so hard to find/
in a world when we all are blind/
and gray skies make it so damn hard to shine/
Im tempted to not attempt again/
I think i need a sign straight sent from Him/
to let me know if he can repent my sins/
till then im writin till i empty pens/
I believe the only ones free are the deceased/
they look so peaceful, finally released/
Meanwhile, were all packed in a cage/
like rats in a cage, trapped in a rage/
Actors, all trapped in a stage/
in a play that we all call "A Slap In The Face"/
We all got a part that matters/
but its hard for me to dream with a heart thats shattered/"

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