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    *Krazie killah |vs| Hollow*(VOTE NOW!)

    Nice that you accepted the challenge.

    Regular battle
    25-30 bars
    no hatin or dick ryde votes
    first to 3 votes wins
    votes must be explained*


    Anyone is first to drop, got 24 hours for reply.
    Last edited by K®åz΀_K‡LLåH™; 08-30-2010 at 03:18 PM.

    I blast at any kat who boast & brags--
    Ya clique aint holdin ass, ya boast with fags--
    Impacts from pens I grasp, leafs lit from the elders stash--
    Killah holds the math- scribed on sheets that told the plan--
    -killah

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    Checkin in.

    Oh, and careful on that 24hr. response limit. I'm on post approval. Sometimes my posts don't get approved for a day or two anyway. But yea, I'll get at you tonight.
    Q) You want respect in these battlegrounds?
    A) Gimme 8 an' earn it.

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    Yo, Ive always managed to imagine the worst--
    I imagine it hurts, these grotesque of scenes that causes your vision to blurr--
    It was my vision to her, executed the most flawless piece of depictions that yearn..
    An infliction that burns crimson colors from painted portraits of her-
    Dreams left in dispersions that turn, ya whole fuckin life into dirt--
    Lost in a state, where hollow lives are erased from the moments of birth--
    I was the first- to move the crowd from the light that consumed yo whole earth--
    Im rippin this guy- like the garments torn from the beatings of christ--
    Ya fuckin hollow meaning of life, like the doctor who aborted the fetus and died--
    Its the meaning you cried, the bitch-in ya that causes your expression to sigh--
    Im not the the type of kat who you can fight and grip mics with on some all-shit--
    On half wits banned from portals who cant spit, crafty flows from a vacant ditch--
    Made sick, I roam with killahs who devour dreams and chunk fist--
    Hollow hits can contrast the way I shuffle emcees like dj's on ya play-list--
    Feeble minded niggas hate this, shoddy lyricism from hollow rhymes to get faymous--
    No relevant reason for greatness, you lack hits like coke left in ya base-hit--
    Hollow niggas cant shake this, in-dent the design-power trips with scripts to hit yo void--
    I strike with poise, got that raw rap never played with toys- made to make that hollow noise--
    wuuuuuu-wuuu, swords drawn at close range- a hollow victim who was torn like a loose page--
    So swift, the booth gave- instruments that played the tunes that struck us with pain--
    Or the type of shit that gots Hollow thinkin hes on top of the game--
    I'll be bumpin that H, with a gang of bitches and make it rain on yo grave--
    Killah is raw with brains- Ive walked with balls with chains with the heart of slaves--
    Across the plains- strike at anythin thats imposed as fake--
    Your in the losers place, in the middle just to cop another Bowl--
    Where the losers go, where they shake the dice and lose dey soul--
    You cant listen, you cough at the flow- sick rhymes a fatal dose--
    Only made for those- who dont play that wack shit just to hate and boast--
    Christ laughed when you got to the top and the gates were closed--
    It claims and shows- exemplifying the way I blow ya fuckin face with holes--

    Yo..

    You from the city where fags meet- rap sheets- and dirty covers--
    Im at where the rain sleeps and snowmans made out of crimson colors--


    Last edited by K®åz΀_K‡LLåH™; 08-28-2010 at 05:14 AM.

    I blast at any kat who boast & brags--
    Ya clique aint holdin ass, ya boast with fags--
    Impacts from pens I grasp, leafs lit from the elders stash--
    Killah holds the math- scribed on sheets that told the plan--
    -killah

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    Quit that bullshit about ridin wit killahs; join me in real-life, dude/
    If you was really livin hot, you wouldn't need that verse to self-hype you!/
    In real life, you a punk... And a fag... Who wouldn't do somethin bad/
    To 'Low if you owned HALF of the skill you THOUGHT that you fuckin had!/
    Vic Mackey's Shield couldn't save this gangsta--if he brought a hundred mags/
    But fuck guns, I can beat this motherfucker, with nothin but a number pad!/
    You a 0, you got guns? I got 1, 2... Plus 3, 4-5s/
    So watch your 6, cause I'm comin wit 7... Maybe 8 more .9's!/
    I'll go mobb deep on him; Krazie's scared, shook; thinkin' this crook's worthy?/
    Act like he pimpin Diddy style--Bad Boy! Says he's 21, but "Nigga, ya look 30!"/
    Now, I wasn't gonna resort to gay jokes but homie, wait just a fuckin minute/
    As much as "Hollow" comin out ya mouth, ain't it only right that I MUST be cummin in it!?/
    I'm walkin all over you. No wonder swallowin defeat seemin so salty/
    Ya flow's faulty. The day you beat me's the day that Freeda drops 20 bars with no multies!/
    The same day Shady's afraid to go balls deep, and 50 stops stutterin G's/
    Li'l Wayne drops Young Money and the whole fresh-coast stops fuckin wit weed!/
    I'll turn this stage to a barren wasteland; fucker, you faker than animation/
    So I'll beat you black and blue, then seperate the colors like racists and segregation/
    This faggot read two books in his life. Rap for Dummies and Deep-Throatin for Males/
    I noticed that in that profile picture that you got posted, ya frail/
    A threat to me? No, sir--you failed! I'll crank the heat up, leave you one step closer to Hell/
    My bullets steal your soul, squeeze, unload til you see your Ghost in a shell/
    And have death embracin this chick, like the cover of a Harlequin script/
    Turn this charlatan Scarlet from a slit throat, that's how the wind blows.
    Now get gone with it, bitch!/

    Italicized word-plays you might not catch completely on the first read.
    Couple notes:
    --Los Mags are a gang in the show, The Shield, which is about a cop, Vic Mackey.
    --Wasn't gonna use gay jokes, but wait just a minute. After a minute, I use the "walkin all over you" "swallowin defeat seemin so/swallowin da feet semen's so"

    Other than that, everything pretty easy to understand.
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    uppin for votes

    I blast at any kat who boast & brags--
    Ya clique aint holdin ass, ya boast with fags--
    Impacts from pens I grasp, leafs lit from the elders stash--
    Killah holds the math- scribed on sheets that told the plan--
    -killah

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    simply put i wish i could throw out that hater vote that i feel like ive been getting but its obvious the attacks that hollow had were much more personal and punishing and the flips were crazy a couple punches in both verses were played but hollow was more clever with his deliveries

    hollow gmv
    My love for GOOD lyrics is unconditional

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    biggest flaw in krazie's verse was exploited and put to shame after this:

    Now, I wasn't gonna resort to gay jokes but homie, wait just a fuckin minute/
    As much as "Hollow" comin out ya mouth, ain't it only right that I MUST be cummin in it!?/

    da mere fact dat hollow's verse was much more direct was a gain of advantage easily but he was also more creative and stronger with his punchlines

    krazie's verse was pretty good as well but not a very "on point" battle verse

    i vote hollow

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    nice, uppin for votes

    I blast at any kat who boast & brags--
    Ya clique aint holdin ass, ya boast with fags--
    Impacts from pens I grasp, leafs lit from the elders stash--
    Killah holds the math- scribed on sheets that told the plan--
    -killah

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    upppin for votes, lets close this shit out ..

    I blast at any kat who boast & brags--
    Ya clique aint holdin ass, ya boast with fags--
    Impacts from pens I grasp, leafs lit from the elders stash--
    Killah holds the math- scribed on sheets that told the plan--
    -killah

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    Whoa hollows gmv.

    His punchlines were crazy, word play sweet. And he was more personal. I like where KK was going in the beginning, like his multis but it couldn't stand against Hollow's verse

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